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rank 5849
word count 141631
date submitted 31.05.2008
date updated 19.08.2012
genres: Science Fiction
classification: universal
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Accidental Encounter

Noel Carrol (N. C. Munson)

An extraterrestrial mistake, a controlled space warp left open a fraction too long, a Wyoming hiker unknowingly walks into another world.

 

Alien explorers are studying Earth, moving to and from their planet through a controlled space warp exiting into the Wyoming wilderness. Mark Carter inadvertently enters the warp and is propelled to their world. His surprised hosts resent the intrusion. While awaiting a decision on what to do with him, Mark is introduced to an "experience-sharing" machine, a form of virtual reality that captures snatches of alien life then permits others to live them as if first hand. But unknown to the aliens, the process stimulates Mark's mind. He learns to communicate mentally, manipulate objects remotely, even rearrange his DNA to imitate other creatures. Mark's lover, thinking Mark is lost, travels to Wyoming and there goads the authorities into a search. Because the aliens are simultaneously attempting to learn about Mark's life on Earth, her involvement steadily deepens.

 
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humor, science, science fiction, space travel, space warp

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Ysabetwordsmith wrote 1054 days ago

Good title, good pitch; notably original motifs and arrangement. I was sufficiently intrigued to read about half of the first chapter. The alien sections read better than the human interaction ones, though; that first argument sounded like it was between two gay men. There are some other inconsistencies, but the story has potential. I'll put this on my watch list. Redline: "He had no awareness of being in an upright position."

Cherenkov wrote 1494 days ago

Show us. Don't tell us. Too much of the first chapter tells us what each character is feeling rather than letting us experience it through their actions, words, and the way each character views his or her surroundings.

Susysue wrote 1719 days ago

I have just finished reading the book and i must say im shocked! I too found mark a whiny idiot but i thoroughyl enjoyed it, especially considering ufo books arent my type. i thought the plot was well thought out and well concluded. it kept me entertained from start to finish. well done and thank you for an entertaining read.

macdibble wrote 1720 days ago

Premise is very cool. Love the dogs, great mood, very menacing and mysterious.

Prologue is a good hint at what's to come although not sure you've started it in the right place. Mark is a terrible whiner, he seems to bug all his friends and drag them down. Is it wrong to hope he won't be around for the whole book? Starting with Mark might be a drag to the reader too. I think the story should start after Kathy has already discovered dogs doing bizarre things. That is interesting, there is movement and mystery whenever you use Kathy's viewpoint.

Also the descriptions of people for the sake of descriptions without futhering the plot feels a bit old fashioned, and the floating/switching point of view also doesn't lend itself to the more intense viewpoint you seem to be going for in your overall structure.

marniemaybe wrote 1724 days ago

I liked the pitch for this. I've only read the first few chapters but mostly found it very readable.
I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism - I think some of the dialogue doesn't sound realistic and spoils what is otherwise a good flow. Examples: in chapter 1 "I wonder if I really know the woman" (wouldn't he just say "know her"? Or "really know her at all"?); in chapter 5 "My tilting at windmills was putting our relationship in jeopardy".

I was also a bit confused in the Prologue where "the creature" is described as "two meters long and one meter high". I assumed from the pitch that the aliens were observing a human, but then the measurements don't fit. Also, would aliens use meters as a unit of measurement?

Hope you don't mind the feedback - it is meant to be helpful!

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