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rank 2552
word count 53434
date submitted 09.04.2009
date updated 21.05.2009
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Science Fiction
classification: universal
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Dead Reckoning

Craig J. Cheney

Life is great when you're in command of the greatest ship in explored space. Hanging onto it, however...

 

Captain William Brighton has been entrusted by his superiors with a revolutionary starship, one destined to change the face of the known universe. With it, no place is too far to explore. But such a prize turns out to be too intoxicating for others to ignore. The competition manages to infiltrate Brighton's team and take control of the ship. Cast adrift with those still loyal to him with no power, no way to navigate, and little food, Brighton must push his team to the limits of endurance in order for them to survive. Hunted by others who also want their technological secrets, Brighton cannot allow them to simply stay put and wait to be rescued. His wounded pride will allow no other outcome than the retaking of his stolen ship, and justice for those responsible for its theft. In order to bring this to pass, though, Brighton and his crew must do the impossible: set a course for Earth and hold to it with only the stars to steer by. If the captain's reckoning is wrong, they'll all be dead.

 
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AnnabelleP wrote 1490 days ago

Hi Craig,
The title of this really attracted me, there's something about it, can't put my finger on it but it made me want to read your book.
This reminds me of some of the true-life adventures from the past but thrust into the future, with different equipment and goals. So it's sort of familiar but different at the same time, does that make sense?
William Brighton is a thoughtfully drawn character, you show his strength of character well and I feel that he is a suitable hero for your tale, he fits.
I'm interested to see how this pans out. I like the conflict with the competition, you add the tension well.
I'm not going to nit-pick the technical stuff as there are others here who will do that for you. This was a good read, IMO, good luck with it!
SHELVED!
Bests,
AnnabelleP
(Adelaide Short)

SMNELSON wrote 1518 days ago

So it is you Craig! Hello, so going to read this this weekend :) see ya, Stacey

Keith G wrote 1518 days ago

Craig,

I just read through three chapters, actually your forward and prologue and chapter one but it was enough for me to recognize good writing; this is as good of science fiction as I have read since I read H.G. Wells and Issac Asmiov many decades ago and I put it on my shelf brother and much good luck in your writing career.

Kind Regards,

Keith G.

Rayo Azul wrote 1518 days ago

Okay. Here are some of my comments. A mix of good stuff and nitpicks. First of all, and as I read all of the posts for Dead Reckoning and Day of Reckoning I will give you my comments on Dead Reckoning. To some extent it does apply to both. I enjoyed the story and the idea overall. Nitpicks. I don't know how you guys write this, whether one person does it all or you take turns, but there is an apparent change of style. I liked the parts from Brighton's POV the best and felt that maybe that should be the dominant POV. As each chapter is from a different character's POV it sort of jumps a little. Personally, I have no problem with changes of POV, but I wnated more from Brighton. As I said, seeing it from inside his head worked the best for me. Although your Marine Major is another character I think works well. Written in such a way the story, for me, works better (that, though, is my opinion and you guys wrote it, not me).

Brighton is a strong character and you describe him well. It was easy to identify with him and the promise of his,and his crew´s, journey would definitely keep me reading. From your pitch, this obviously becomes a greater part of the story later.

As I say, I enjoyed this enough to read through to the end and want to read more. Good stuff. On my rotating shelf.

Would appreciate your opinion on my stuff if you have time.

Cheers

Rayo

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