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rank 5851
word count 102891
date submitted 03.07.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
genres: Fiction, Romance, Historical Fictio...
classification: adult
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News from the English Countryside

Sian Lacey Taylder

How many times has Merlin returned to save perfidious Albion in its hour of need? Too often, perhaps, but never quite like this.

 

Merlin reawakes from a thousand years of dormition one cold October evening in 1986 in the Dorset village of Nymphnett Thrubwell, immediately realising that both he and the world around have fundamentally changed, that what was Merlin is now Lucretia and that she has returned to change the course of history. The question is, has she learned from his mistakes or will lust defeat her once again? Initially fêted by both the hoi-polloi and the aristocracy, at first Lucretia can do no wrong – the English love an eccentric, after all. Well, they might love an eccentric but the notion of a madwoman in their midst foments paranoia and before long Lucretia is either feared or hated – or both – by all. The coldest January on record, the unseasonably warm spring and the Great Dorset Earthquake of 1987 all provide evidence of her sorcery and when Lucretia casts a spell to bring together two illicit lovers, the Arthurian myth begins to repeat itself all over again. News from the English Countryside is the first of a two-part story that takes Arthurian mythology, twists the genre, adds a little sexual subversion and returns it to a thoroughly modern context.

 
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Alan Donaghue wrote 1064 days ago

Hi Sian!

Have you visited the real Nempnett Thrubwell? It's in shady-laned backwoods of North Somerset where all the fingerposts point to it until they change and tell you you've just left it. My wife and I have searched for it so often that we are willing to believe Merlin's in the area. Your story clarifies the situation; the entrance to the village is two counties away in Dorset.

That said, the story you've woven is a delight. I just flinch at the idea of having to read twenty long chapters on screen without reaching the end. So I'm backing it in the hope that that forces it into hard copy form.

Best of luck with finding an agent.

Alan Donaghue – Action! Comments or backing welcome; only back if appropriate.

Jane Bain wrote 1175 days ago

Poetically written, and drawing on powerful themes. There have been so many re-tellings of the Arthurian tales but that is in the nature of myth, each version adds depth to the story and this is a nicely crafted one!
See my book 'Life Script: Developing Your Personal Mythology' for more on archetypal figures. I've added your book to my bookshelf, where it sits very comfortably - hope you enjoy my other recommendations too! Jane B.

Giulietta Maria wrote 1387 days ago

Nice cover, the title caught me. When I started reading it was just a poetic as I expected! I like the rhythm of your writing. Ch 2 seemed really long- you could split it, starting Ch 3 with "Ryme was already sitting comfortably..." just an idea. Backed!
Giulietta
(Shonim)

Jason Rice wrote 1423 days ago

This is a nice start. I like it very much.

Slush Prince wrote 1689 days ago

1. Nice Pitch - if that was on the back of the book I would skim the first few pages.

2. You start with 100% satisfaction rating. You lost 2% for saying I am the land in para 4, I got it in para 2

3. You lost 1% for use of the word accumulation, i suspect there are more elegant ways to phrase that sentence.

4. Read on - you've just jarred me back into the real world. I'm reading this anyway and going to continue to do so - -10%

5. Chapter 2 - "But first we must talk" - oops, lose 5%, was loving the lyrical but sparse description flowing through your prose, slightly uneasy with the "shit!" exclamation earlier, but this just dropped me out of the story.

6. She was open-minded and intelligent - boing again. Yes Lucretia is the female merlin and chock, or should that be chick, full of spooky sorcerous power, but you've just shoved a piece of character in my face. Lose 10%

7. L: I'm as mad as a jar of frogs on crack.
U: Please go on
L: I'm going to briefly paraphrase my time in the asylum in a lyrical and poetic way
U: Please go on

In reality most people would be edging for the door or looking for a poker by the fire. Lose 10%

By the end of chapter 2 I'm starting to think about reaching for interview with the vampire and re-reading the first 50 pages.

You have a really nice lyrical flow, good use of language and perceptive imagery. This would be a buy on the shelves after some revision.

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