Powerful Poetry: Categorical Collection

Hello Daniel:

You are truly a prolific poet and it is clear that you have a poetic gift. I enjoyed the rhythm, meter and rhyme of your work. That being said, I have some suggestions:

1. Get rid of the meter counts at the end of each line. The numbers are extremely distracting and downgrade the professionalism of the presentation.

2. Take the table of contents out of the pitch and put it in its own chapter.

3. The line in the pitch which says, "These may very well be the best pieces of prose you will ever read in your whole life," is pretty um...ambitious? On a technical point, prose is not poetry but is actually the opposite of poetry. Dictionary.com defines it this way: ""the ordinary form of spoken or written language, without metrical structure, as distinguished from poetry or verse."

Blessings to you. Poetry can be especially hard to share because it comes from the deepest depths of one's heart. Thanks for your boldness in sharing a part of yourself with the world and may you find wonderful success.

James

WHOA! This is really good stuff. I like the way you do this. It is really really good.
One suggestion would be to cut these into smaller sections because It is a BIT long.
Otherwise it's super good.
I really like this.
This is highly rated and I will back.
Awesome work!

Shelby Z./Driving Winds

P.S. Please take a look at my Christian pirate adventure Driving Winds.

Hi Daniel,

Thanks for backing my 'Elton' book. I've now officially read my first poetry book on here. In short, you're most certainly a very talented writer - the variance and depth of the poems are fantastic. I think it's also great that you cover such a broad scope of subjects as it means virtually any user of this site can find something they're at least interested in, as well as giving other subjects a go once they're into it. Keep up the good work and I'm sure this will start rocketing up the ED chart.

All the best,

lee :-)