Hi Dan. You have certainly put lots of research into your story and executed it well. Really powerful plot. Mike and Clint are great main characters and you paint them well. I'm sure the genre will love this. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Neil. What an enchanting tale. The family are really great and their Grandad is really adorable. The letter they found was intriguing and a great way to end the first chapter. I'm sure kids will love this. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Lily. I thought your format was interesting as are your characters. There is a simplicity about your writing that makes it easy to follow and you bring your characters to life beautifully. I think your title is great. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Stephen. This really is an enchanting tale and you have a unique style to your writing. You have captured the fairytale atmosphere perfectly. Loved the bits of humor and the use of dialogue. The girl and boy chapter was really well described and I liked the woodman's character too. Backed and best of luck with this! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi LFK. What a brilliant adventure. I thought you voiced the closeness of the family really well. Loved Jamie and the way he views things. The little explanations at the end of chapters were helpful and interesting. I think the plot line of the gold rush is great and the sort of story that is enjoyed by all. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Brittany. Your prologue is really stirring. I think Sam is a great character and you voice her well, fleshing out her character within your writing. I'm sure this will be enjoyed by its audience. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Paul. You flash out your characters really well. Spragg is really great and Magda a great contrast. You have caught the era in a contemporary way through your writing, which lows well. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Savannah certainly has her work cut out for her in this exciting fiction. You have a great imagination Gabrielle and deal with other issues through Savannah's character. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Karen. You opening chapters are very emotional. I really felt for Caleigh. Her character was nicely introduced through your writing. The dreams were really intriguing and the way she tries to decipher them adds to this. Your style is really good and your writing flows. Best of luck with this! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Alex. I can't see any youngster not enjoying this. Kyle's cheeky character is well depicted and I love Aunt Carol. The saga with the giant cockroaches was so well described it made my skin crawl. Great concept and wish you all the best of luck with it! Backed, Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Dan. I liked the opening with Ehm's experience of the moon, very imaginative. You used your words well in creating the mystery of her surroundings and also paint her character well. I love the concept of riddles and conundrums that she faces and think the genre will love this. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Samy. What an excellent concept you have to your story. Your writing is very good and your characters engaging. I thought the description of Antonio's experience in the volcano was voiced well and of course I liked Maria's character. There is lots of superstition around the number 13 and this will certainly intrigue and thrill it's audience. Maria view book

Hi Fletcher. What a great collection. Your stories are short, but so impactive. You manage to engage the reader with the character and then whisk them off into the concept of the story, which is a skill. I particularly liked A Substitute Passion. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi NSL. Hex is a great name for your MC, it suits his role in your plot. You bring his humorous character to life through the dialogue. Your writing is really good and the story has a great concept. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic LInx) view book

Hi Laurence. I think your plot is really clever and well pitched. The murders are well described and I liked the additions that followed them. Julia comes across as a strong character. Great film material or a series. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Athman. The prospect of an asteroid heading for Earth certainly draws the reader into your story. I like the way the Man of Fire works with Zanga through his dreams. Zanga's doubt in the reality of the sword and the dreams comes across well. Backed and best of luck with this and your other book! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi John. You have an interesting concept to your story. Sairis's character is intriguing. The description of his encounter with the bandits was well voiced. In your pitch maybe place 'a' before horse or (dog, wolf and a horse.) Also, rising may read better as raising. This is a great tale and I wish you the best of luck with it! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Lauren. Your story opens with a chilling tale and certainly makes the reader want to read on. Emma's friendship with Cassie introduces the story of the house's past really well. I liked the sequence of the dreams with Richard. You certainly know how to make this chilling through your writing and have a great use of adjectives. Backed and best of luck with this! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Alex. Your story has a great concept. You portray the characters really well. Piotr is absolutely adorable. I think his encounter with Morheus was voiced well. What a great magical character he is, captivating the children as he would captivate the reader. Very best of luck with this! Maria (Cosmic Linx) view book

Hi Joy. I think every woman will be picturing their perfect man when they read about Georgie's dad. His charm really came across and Georgie has such a sweet nature. Really great romance that the genre will love. Backed and best of luck with this! Maria (Cosmic LInx) view book