Hello again David.I liked this book just as much as Convergence!!Both of the stories are very meaningful and I love that you have added a touch of insanity to the first story with your purposeful grammar errors. It really helps to portray that the book is written by the character which makes it much more involving.The descriptions in the second story are quite breathtaking! I really felt like I could hear the waves and feel the spray coming from the water; to create so much beauty in such a solemn tale is quite remarkable.Well done yet again.And once more, please let me know when you have added more chapters or when you bring out another book. I love your work and just can't get enough!Thank you, Kay.
Oh my god!!!!! I felt for that little boy so much! I am very impressed by the way you get us truly involved with all of the characters in the book!I cannot decide which story line I like best but love the fact that you keep switching between them, it makes the book very interesting and fast paced. I was so disappointed when I ran out of chapters to read!!I know you have some spelling and grammar to sort out but I am sure you will get that done when you get published (and I have no doubt that you will get this published - really amazing!) please, please tell me when you have added more chapters as I am really eager to continue the read.Best of luck (though I don't think you need it!), Kay.