Wonderful story! Six stars! view book

Have you seen the film Unleashed? This reminded me of that film a little. view book

Thank you very much for re-backing my book, wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! view book

Hello Diana,

I roughly finished my writing and finally have time to read others' book. I like the way you describe the inner thoughts of the charactors and you are very good with abstract way of thinking. A lot of emotions run through, the battle is not physical is is of the mind and soul. I was not born into a religious background but I like your writing and you so six stars! :D view book

Nice Cover! The book reminded me of Star Trek, a good read, will come back later! :D view book

Humans and chickens? It sounds funny. But I guess the chicken was a metaphor for other issues that you wanted to discuss. An interesting set up. view book

Oh poor Carly! It reminded of what happened with my life, I know exactly what some of those stuff meant. The beginning sounded like Dr. Who! It was very imaginative! The story is very weel written, I like you adding the song into it! Will read more soon! :D view book

It sounds like poetry, love the way you describe the environments, very atmospheric. Immaculate! view book

I love children's stories and I can see where some of your story coming from, very well done! Best of luck with publishing your book and charity! view book

Hi Tom, first of all, the name of your book attracts good vibes, it is a very positive and sweet title, I liked it.

The beginning of the book was like an intro to a epic film of some sort. I like the way you pay attention to details, small things from the memory brings the book alive with charactor. I still remember my weekend in London and it was St Patrick Day, it was a sunny day which was rare, and people were singing and drinking just next to the London Eye, good days. I will come back and read more soon! Six stars! Have a great day! :D view book

First of all, I like the title, simple and yet it reflects the theme of the book, also nice cover too! I like the style of the writing, it kind of reminding me of some films with Huge Grant in them. Very good British way of putting the words. It is already on my book shelf! Six stars! :D view book

Thank you so much for commenting and backing my books, much appreciated! I hope youliked them! I am so tired writing today and will read your book tomorrow! :D view book

I like the way you emphasis a short sentence and change the style of the words. It is like a movie, and it reminds me of some other movies that I've watched. It's got a good vibe, wonderful! view book

In the beggining, it's like watching CSI. I like the way you take your time and describe the surroundings. Then when it went further on, there were more analysis of the man and girl's psychology and the running away from stranger showed lack of trust from outsiders, perhaps experience learnt when living with her family. Overall, very well written! view book

I love the switches between the bold and normal writings, they make the important thougts stand out and grab the reader's attention. Just be you, no matter what others say, if you changed your content to please others then the book would have lost its purpose. Some people learn the hard way, some learn from others' experience, hope your book would help others to become a better person without so much of struggle and confusion. Best of Luck! view book

Your beginning reminded me of Star Trek and Avatar. I love this kind of stories, the trailer was well made too!

Have your heard of James Lovelock's Gaia Theory? I'm not very sure about whether it's wishful thinking or reality. What do you reckon?

Will read more when I've done with my book ! :D view book

I sincerely thank everyone who cared enough to comment here and being truthful to my writing!

Sometimes I get very excited on recording my idea I lost track with the tenses. I am aware of it and I think I do need a bit of help with grammar and wording to make everything look consistent and readable if I were to publish anything. The most difficult part for me is I don't notice these mistakes myself that's why I put it here so I can improve.

Thank you everyone! :D view book