Neville, I’ve put together a Quantitative Critique Score Sheet to respond to your story from a contest perspective. I hope you find this informative and helpful. (Max 10x10 pts)Title: [Cosmos 501] Author: [Neville Kent] Wow Factor (Read Speed/Enjoyment) [10] Speed (Easy/Fast) [09] Enjoyment (your writing is responsible for that)[09] Interest (very good scenes) Literacy (Editing/Proofing/Structure) [07] Free of (obvious) Spelling Errors (easy fix) [07] Free of (obvious) Contextual Grammar Errors (easy edit) [10] Free of Distracting Dialog Story [09] Coherent / Order[10] Character/Subject Development Marketing[10] Cover Design [09] Pitch (Consider having stronger teasers. For example, say the Keeper might explain some exciting secrets without saying what they are. TOTAL [90/100] Comments: I enjoyed the story. Characters and plot were compelling. I recommend it.E L Russell view book
Jo Lynn, I’ve put together a Quantitative Critique Score Sheet to respond to your story from a contest perspective. I hope you find this informative and helpful. (Max 10x10 pts)Title: [Who Killed The President?] Author: [Jo Lynn] Wow Factor (Read Speed/Enjoyment) [10] Speed (Easy/Fast) [09] Enjoyment[09] Interest Literacy (Editing/Proofing/Structure) [10] Free of (obvious) Spelling Errors [10] Free of (obvious) Contextual Grammar Errors [09] Free of Distracting Dialog Story [09] Coherent / Order[10] Character/Subject Development Marketing[10] Cover Design [09] Pitch (a bit short – consider a stronger teaser) TOTAL [95 /100] Comments: I enjoyed the story. Characters and plot were realistic. I highly recommend it.E L Russell view book
AG, I’ve put together a Quantitative Critique Score Sheet to respond to your story from a contest perspective. I hope you find this informative and helpful. (Max 10x10 pts)Title: [Shining Dawn] Author: [A.G.Chaudhuri] Wow Factor (Read Speed/Enjoyment) [09] Speed (Easy/Fast) [09] Enjoyment[10] Interest Literacy (Editing/Proofing/Structure) [10] Free of (obvious) Spelling Errors [10] Free of (obvious) Contextual Grammar Errors [10] Free of Distracting Dialog Story [10] Coherent / Order[09] Character/Subject Development Marketing[10] Cover Design [09] Pitch (a bit long with minor plot give away) TOTAL [96 /100] Comments: This is a story I very much enjoyed and appreciated. I look forward to purchasing the book for my real bookshelf.E L Russell view book
I am a long-time reader of science fiction and I must say I really enjoyed the immersion into this universe you’ve created. The in-depth descriptions of place and people satisfied a hunger I have had for some time. True, there are a few gaps – places where I would have preferred to linger and listened more. As one who has also done research on cognition I like the inclusion selective memory loss into your plot. The only downside I see is the descriptor “Incomplete”. Please don’t leave me hanging out here. Good story! view book
Bob, thanks for bringing your book to my attention. I like what you had to share. If I had the story in book form I would keep it on the stand by my bed to read. Will reminds me of a few students I have had over the years. Good job! E L Russell view book