Hi everyone. I love the pitch already. I am new to this site and I am also looking for some feedback. I welcome all comments and suggestions. I will take a look at your book and feel free to look at mines.
Am getting to grips slowly but surely with all of this and have been made feel welcome by several people which I really appreciate. Am just wondering what the best way to contribute and improve my writing?
Just wanted to say hi and explain why I am on here. I have been writing a book about my little sister Charlene and wanted to see how it can be improved and hope that one day it can be published. When she was deathly ill she asked me to write her story down and I have tried to as best I can. It has been useful and painful to write in equal measure as I remember everything, but I want to keep my promise to her in this. Any help, criticism or backing would be really appreciated more than I can say.
The book is called 'Journey Through the Valley of the Shadow' and the description is "A sick child is adopted into a family but wrestles with her identity. Deathly ill, she dreams of a school in Uganda..." - http://www.authonomy.com/books/46259/journey-through-the-valley-of-the-shadow-charlene-s-story-/
Thanks again for those who already welcomed me, love the idea of this site. Good to meet you all and God bless,