A must have changed 1000 times. One worst than the other.(All the bad critiques, are people who CAN't go on form the first..) Scrap it and start where people think it's ok. Often given as advice. If you feel something's missing that you had earlier, maybe find a way to feed it in later.
Afterwards, things flow.. from the 3rd onwards...
Anybody, have any inspirational suggestions, ON how to start the first chapter.
What to write in it.
Without being CHEAP and GIMMICKY, like mine..