6 hours ago
Metal Posted: 26/05/2012 15:47:32
3 days ago
'Admit.' Posted: 26/05/2012 15:51:26
18 days ago
Still think Collin's in with a chance with 'Toads'
It's a good first line too! Posted: 26/05/2012 16:48:45
18 mins ago
My first word is "We."
I think it speaks to the need we all have to be loved and accepted in modern society. It's really quite a bit more impactful than you think it is.
But I guess Toads and Bulls*** have me beat. And I rather like both Admit and Metal.
But me, I'm all about the "We." Posted: 26/05/2012 16:57:12
1 day ago
Story Posted: 26/05/2012 17:43:04
7 hours ago
Ha! Posted: 26/05/2012 17:46:20
6 days ago
Introduction. Posted: 26/05/2012 17:47:17
24 days ago
"Wake up!" is the first two words.
Posted: 27/05/2012 01:21:49
12 days ago
Wow... impressed. Great word. Why thankyou, Sharda. An Authonomy ''expert'' tried to change it to ''Screw you'', but that didn't fit the character at all. Another urged me to soften the first para, but I resisted. Quite a few have commented that they loved the shock value in the opening. Shocking story, so I figured it should start with a shock! Posted: 27/05/2012 09:04:52
Wow... impressed. Great word.
When Posted: 27/05/2012 10:14:30
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