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'Admit.' Posted: 26/05/2012 15:51:26
176 days ago
Still think Collin's in with a chance with 'Toads'
It's a good first line too! Posted: 26/05/2012 16:48:45
19 days ago
My first word is "We."
I think it speaks to the need we all have to be loved and accepted in modern society. It's really quite a bit more impactful than you think it is.
But I guess Toads and Bulls*** have me beat. And I rather like both Admit and Metal.
But me, I'm all about the "We." Posted: 26/05/2012 16:57:12
310 days ago
Story Posted: 26/05/2012 17:43:04
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Ha! Posted: 26/05/2012 17:46:20
76 days ago
Introduction. Posted: 26/05/2012 17:47:17
7 days ago
"Wake up!" is the first two words.
Posted: 27/05/2012 01:21:49
165 days ago
Wow... impressed. Great word. <nolink></nolink>Why thankyou, Sharda. An Authonomy ''expert'' tried to change it to ''Screw you'', but that didn't fit the character at all. Another urged me to soften the first para, but I resisted. Quite a few have commented that they loved the shock value in the opening. Shocking story, so I figured it should start with a shock! Posted: 27/05/2012 09:04:52
Wow... impressed. Great word. <nolink></nolink>
33 days ago
When Posted: 27/05/2012 10:14:30
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Socorro Posted: 27/05/2012 12:41:16
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