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Post your first word.

Cariad

first registered 03.06.10

last online 10 hours ago

'Admit.'

Posted: 26/05/2012 15:51:26

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Sharda D

first registered 11.02.12

last online 169 days ago

Still think Collin's in with a chance with 'Toads'
from DIRT.
It's a good first line too!


Posted: 26/05/2012 16:48:45

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AudreyB

first registered 22.08.11

last online 13 days ago

My first word is "We."

I think it speaks to the need we all have to be loved and accepted in modern society. It's really quite a bit more impactful than you think it is.

But I guess Toads and Bulls*** have me beat. And I rather like both Admit and Metal.

But me, I'm all about the "We."


Posted: 26/05/2012 16:57:12

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liberscriptus

first registered 09.02.12

last online 304 days ago

Story

Posted: 26/05/2012 17:43:04

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Branestawm's cat

first registered 02.10.11

last online 36 mins ago

Ha!

Posted: 26/05/2012 17:46:20

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Jilli

first registered 15.05.08

last online 69 days ago

Introduction.

Posted: 26/05/2012 17:47:17

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Secret Durham

first registered 10.01.12

last online 18 hours ago

Wake

"Wake up!" is the first two words.

From Second.



Posted: 27/05/2012 01:21:49

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RaineyC

first registered 19.05.12

last online 159 days ago

Wow... impressed. Great word. <nolink>close quotes</nolink>

Why thankyou, Sharda. An Authonomy ''expert'' tried to change it to ''Screw you'', but that didn't fit the character at all. Another urged me to soften the first para, but I resisted. Quite a few have commented that they loved the shock value in the opening. Shocking story, so I figured it should start with a shock!

Posted: 27/05/2012 09:04:52

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Charlie James

first registered 18.04.12

last online 27 days ago

When

Posted: 27/05/2012 10:14:30

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Maevesleibhin

first registered 12.08.09

last online 22 hours ago

Socorro

Posted: 27/05/2012 12:41:16

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