Hi Kendall, thank you so much for backing I Wish, I hope you get to read it in your busy schedule! Thanks again!

Hello. How are you? I would appreciate to switch comments and feedback with you! Would you be able to do the same? If you want to read the rest of the book....it is finished and on Kindle and paperback on Amazon.com. Proceeds are going to mental health facilities and burn survivors. Would you support? I am so blessed to be able to help others with my story. I hope I will be able to stop even just one person from doing something drastic like I did. I will put your book on my wl and comment:) and even back your book. Hope for it in return? God bless:)! Bethany

Hello there.
I wanted to say a big thank you for putting 'The Worst and the Best' on your book shelf, I'm over joyed that you evidently enjoyed it.
I hope that you will enjoy whatever else I put up in the future, and do feel free to send a message every now and then perhaps recommending ideas or what you might like to see happen, or even just to say hello.
Also, I'm very sorry about such a late thank you message, I've been up to my neck with things I haven't really had time to do much else on the site except write a couple forum messages begging people to read. :P
Hope to hear from you soon.
All the best.
-A.M

Kendall,

I was so impressed with your book. It was really a pleasure to break into it. I read through chapter four, but I will definitely return to finish it up. You have captured my imagination... I hope you don't mind, I found a couple easy fixes that you might like to know about.

"His only vision was(,) like the tunnel which now…" I don’t think you need the comma

"And momentarily focussed (focused)…"

"The tears fell with ease and speed (sped) along their familiar path..."


"Yet Jacob had not the inclination to pay attention to the male presence felt opposite and sensed by the powerful pupils…." This reads a little awkward. And I don't think you intended it, but it almost sounds like the stranger is intimately attracted to Jacob.

I hope I didn't over-step my boundaries. I do truly love your book and will be back to read the rest!

Dianna Lanser
Nothing But The Blood