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Daniel Delacy wrote 901 days ago   

After one year on the site and nearly 700 reviews, I have accepted many of the suggestions (sometimes, I admit, through gritted teeth) and Apocalypse Then is now fully edited. I believe it is ready for the desk and ask, If you find the time, that you take a look at it. If you then believe that it is good enough, please consider placing it on your desk. All the best DD ;o)

Daniel Delacy wrote 910 days ago   

Once upon a time you were kind enough to back my book Apocalypse Then. After one year on the site and nearly 700 reviews I have accepted many of the suggestions (sometimes, I admit, through gritted teeth) and the work is fully edited. I believe Apocalypse Then is now ready for the desk. If you belive this to be so please consider placing it on your desk. All the best DD ;o)

fh wrote 920 days ago   

Dear James,
Good Morning! I wonder if you would care to take another look at my novel – The Assassins Village– a murder mystery/historical fiction set in Cyprus?
I have been delighted with the response from readers, and the chance to make the Editor’s Desk this month. With this new system, a book has to be on the most shelves for a long period all at once, to survive. At present, I’m on the least safe shelf of all the top five, so without more support, I’m afraid I’ll be dropping off.
I hate having to ask, but your very kind support might be the only way to keep The Assassins’ Village on the desk. The whole month would be fantastic, but I understand that there are many great books here that we’d all love to support. So anything would help – please.
I appreciate everyone is plaguing you with requests but at position number 5 my place is not guaranteed and a bit precarious. I would hate to miss this opportunity. I plan to stay active on Authonomy long after November (3rd book to come), so I’ll make sure I can support your work in the future. Thank you again for your support.
Many, many thanks and best wishes,
Faithx

Daniel Delacy wrote 967 days ago   

First came Apocalypse Then

Now comes the sequel

Apocalypse Then Part Two

Care to swap reads?

Roger Thurling wrote 970 days ago   

Dear James

I would like to read your book "A Red Cadillac for Mama", and I should like to suggest that we read each other's books with a view to possibly backing and maybe also commenting on them ... but only if we think them worthy, there is no suggestion that we should back anything we don't think is of value.

I am prepared to go first, but before doing so I should like to make sure that you are active on Authonomy, and that you would like to 'exchange reads'.

My book is "Variae Lectiones", and it is rather long ... I wouldn't expect you to read much of it - you would probably find that 1% is plenty.

Please let me know if you are interested, and if so, if there is any part of your book that you would particularly like me to read or comment upon.

Thanks.
Roger Thurling

klouholmes wrote 1016 days ago   

Hi James, Have you looked at The Swan Bonnet? If you can take a few minutes and see if you can support it for the Ed’s Desk, it would be much appreciated. A second thanks in case you’ve already shelved it. :) - Katherine

Daniel Delacy wrote 1018 days ago   

Care to swap reads? :o)

Joel Juedes wrote 1024 days ago   

Hi James. I was wondering if you might take a look at my book “Purple Eyes”? It is an epic story of a lonesome boy seeking to find a way in the futuristic world he finds himself in. I will return any reads/backings.

Thanks and best wishes!
Joel Juedes

Famlavan wrote 1025 days ago   

Hi James
Being on the desk does funny things to a person, well to me!
Fluctuating between two and three with only hours to go my head says. ‘You’re safe, you’re safe’
And my heart it says. ‘Don’t be stupid - stupid!’
My mother used to say. ‘You should always follow your heart.’
So this message… well, it speaks for itself.
If you possibly get half a chance can you have a look at Museum of Old Beliefs and see if it is worth supporting, if you can that would be brilliant!
David and Harv are supporting me and if we can help you please lets us know. –Good luck!

Ian xx

blueboy wrote 1046 days ago   

Frisking the Ticklish

“He took my book away--and I was glad.”
That’s all I knew.
It was, for a time, the one thought in my singular existence.
“Gone! my book was gone!” and I felt glad.
But also, I felt violated as I stood there,
staring through the bars,
watching the officer flip
through the mystic lines of Hafiz.

(Like he could appreciate eleventh century, middle eastern, poetry.)

He had barely been able to read the computer screen as he checked me into my cell.
I… I had been patient when he,
thinking my incense crystals were crack cocaine,
had cuffed me again and searched me head-to-toe.

And I had forgiven him his lack of humor when I, giggling, said:
“You could’ve at least bought me dinner first, buddy.”

But this—this was too much.
With Hafiz went my heart
like a thing dead already into a body bag.
He toe-tagged it with an unreadable flourish
and a blank face—a face as dead and transparent as
the zip-lock now resting in peace on the table.

I could not help but wonder if he
had any idea what he had done.
He had taken poetry from a poet!
Now—there’s just something intrinsically wrong about that—No,
wrong is too light a word; it was tragic:
(although, a tragedy worthy of the irony).
Rhetorical brilliance alone, though,
cannot justify the pain I felt.
And so at last I found myself glad
he had took my book of poetry,
‘cause if he hadn’t,
I most certainly would have
thrown it at him.



care to swap reads and comment on the books?

RichardBard wrote 1088 days ago   

Dear James,

I’m appealing to you for your support of BRAINRUSH—not because I backed your book (or because I’m getting married in two days and it would make a great wedding gift!), but because it’s a polished page-turner that is ready for the Editor’s Desk. Whether you’re a thriller fan or not, I promise it to be a gripping read. In fact, many readers here liked it so much that they read it from start to finish. (Not an easy feat when you have to do it entirely online!)

It’s currently number 6, and your vote of confidence could make a big difference. Why not give it a look?

Cheers,

Richard Bard
BRAINRUSH (2010 ABNA Semi-Finalist)

Ana G. Ram wrote 1102 days ago   

Hi,

I have really enjoyed and backed your book on Mar, 6. I would be ever so grateful if you could take a quick look at Snowflake in return. It’s possible that you already did, but Authonomy doesn’t always register backings. If you do decide to support Snowflake this month, you’ll get a bonus back from my friend and supporter Igorina.

Thank you and all the very best,
Ana

RichardBard wrote 1102 days ago   

Hi James,

OK, it’s down to the wire…

1. I’m getting married at the end of the month. The honeymoon is the first week of June. (Hooray!)

2. My book, BRAINRUSH, is number 6. I’m trying desperately to move it into the top 5 before the end of this month. After that it will surely plummet since I’ll be offline with nothing but my wonderful wife on my mind…

3. BRAINRUSH is an excellent thriller worthy of the Editor’s Desk. In fact, Amazon just announced that it was selected as a semi-finalist in the 2010 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Awards Contest. Out of 5,000 entrants BRAINRUSH made it to the top 50. The three finalists will be announced in late May. Fingers crossed!

4. The first chapter only takes three minutes to read.

5. I’ve already backed your book.

6. DOUBLE RETURN READS: If return reads/backings are important to you, here’s the bonus: After you read BRAINRUSH, send a quick confirming message to lanreader (tsr 49) and thrillerlover (tsr 29). They will both return the favor. (Their links are below.)

I hope you’ll lend your support. Let’s call it a wedding gift!

Cheers,

Richard Bard
BRAINRUSH (2010 ABNA Semi-Finalist)

Lanreader: http://authonomy.com/Profile.aspx?userid=3d242591-0cf2-485c-8d67-f15057241fcf
Thrillerlover: http://authonomy.com/Profile.aspx?userid=8c0adba0-ca1b-4512-b28e-fae7790279c9

Burgio wrote 1103 days ago   

I commented on and backed your book almost two months ago. Wondering if you can squeeze in time to look at mine - Grain of Salt – and put it on your shelf for a while. It's a medical mystery. Hard for it to compete with all the vampires and demons lurking here but it's a good read. Thanking you in advance. Burgio

soutexmex wrote 1104 days ago   

I commented/backed your book 66 days ago - though my book has been on this site for over a year, I still can use comments to better my novel; please SHELVE it if you deem it worthy enough.

If you think you’ve already BACKED my book, I ask if you wouldn’t mind giving it another quick spin on your shelf, as some people this week, who thought they’d previously backed it, had it finally registered in my activity feed. I understand if you don't have time to comment but I can use all BACKINGS in my position - cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

Francis Albert McGrath wrote 1116 days ago   

Hi jamesrdunn, this is just to say I BACKED your book previously. If you have time, and you feel my book is worth backing, I would appreciate your backing, as I am quite close to the ED, and in return I will give you an honest critique of your work in due course. Frank McGrath ("Artistic Licence" - a crime thriller "There can be few more accomplished thrillers than this on Authonomy")

RichardBard wrote 1116 days ago   

Hi James,

I enjoyed reading some of ‘A Red Cadillac for Mama' today. You have a solid writing talent. It was my pleasure to back it. Hopefully, my low TSR helped with your ranking.

I could really use your help...

Would you please take a quick look at BRAINRUSH and back it if you think it deserves your vote? It only takes three minutes to read the first chapter. It's close to the Editor's Desk and your vote would make a big difference. Comments are always welcome but certainly not necessary.

Thanks for your consideration.

Richard Bard

PS. I’m excited to report that Amazon announced this week that BRAINRUSH was selected as a semi-finalist in the 2010 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Awards Contest. Out of 5,000 entrants, BRAINRUSH made it to the top fifty. The three finalists will be announced in late May. Fingers crossed!

Ana G. Ram wrote 1118 days ago   

Hi,
I have really enjoyed and backed your book on 6 Mar. I would be forever grateful if you could take a quick look at Snowflake for me.
Thank you and best of luck,
Ana.

Francis Albert McGrath wrote 1122 days ago   

Hi jamesrdunn, this is just to say I BACKED your book previously. If you have time, and you feel my book is worth backing, I would appreciate your backing, as I am quite close to the ED, and in return I will give you an honest critique of your work in due course. Frank McGrath ("Artistic Licence" - a crime thriller "There can be few more accomplished thrillers than this on Authonomy")

RichardBard wrote 1123 days ago   

Hello James,

If you back or comment on BRAINRUSH I promise to return the favor on 'A Red Cadillac for Mama' within 24 hours…

First off, if you don’t have an agent yet, stick with it because they’re watching this site. You never know what might happen… (See my profile)

This is one of the recent comments on BRAINRUSH:

“I read at least two books a week, but this one I savored. You have a talent for writing with an effortless flow that keeps the reader interested in what comes next, creating a 'can't put this book down' experience! This has definite number one potential. Shelved.”

It's a gripping story about a terminally ill man who develops extraordinary mental abilities after a freak accident. He must use his new talents to rescue the people he loves from an international terrorist group in Venice, Italy.

It takes three minutes to read the first chapter. I hope you’ll check it out. (I’m approaching the Editor’s Desk and your vote will make a big difference.)

Cheers,

Richard Bard
BRAINRUSH (2010 ABNA Quarter-Finalist)