Hi Mark. Not sure how to do a review on this site, but I gave you 5 Stars (I almost never give 6 unless a book is complete). Not sure yet what the larger plot will be in this book, but it is one of the most original things I have ever read, and I want to read the rest! I hope this has been accepted by a publisher. If you get a chance, I hope you will check out Hearth: Exile as well. It, too, is not complete (though I have completed it outside of this site). About 22,000 wds. here. Anyway, fantastic book and talented writing from yourself. Thanks!