If you have the time and inclination, I'd appreciate your taking a look at Puramore - The Lute of Pythagoras. The novel is rising fast in the rankings - from 3500 to under 500 in just over two weeks.

Please let me know what you think.

Good day fellow writer and child of God,

A good mystery must always involve who, what, where, why, when, and how. This is certainly true about the collections of books that make up the bible, the greatest mystery ever. One of the mysteries that it contains is whether or not Jesus committed transgression(s) against the commandments and laws Moses gave. He stood trail before Pilate accused by the Chief Priests and Elders of sedition and subverting the people to uprising.

Standing before Pontius Pilate who threatens to condemn him to be crucified, Jesus of Nazareth stood silent. It was written that he would do this in Isaiah 53:7. Would there be evidence that could have been presented to save Christ from this suffering? As Abel's blood cried out to God after Cain had slain him, the blood of Christ calls out to us from scripture in his defense.

This manuscript presents the testimonial evidence that proves which leads to conviction that Christ was innocent of any transgression of the law of Moses. To believe it - this is a must read.

Hope you will find the time to take a gander at this exegesis and possibly * and back.

If this is a repeat of a former request, please forgive the intrudence. Must advertise to sell.

Yours in Christ
Harold

After one year on the site and nearly 700 reviews, I have accepted many of the suggestions (sometimes, I admit, through gritted teeth) and Apocalypse Then is now fully edited. I believe it is ready for the desk and ask, If you find the time, that you take a look at it. If you then believe that it is good enough, please consider placing it on your desk. All the best DD ;o)

Ryan, happy to have read and now rated your book. If you could find time to comment on / rate The Firelord's Crown that would be great.
Many thanks
Jim Darcy

First came Apocalypse Then

Now comes the sequel

Apocalypse Then Part Two

Care to swap reads?

6 days and counting…


Please shelve Saffire Drake and the Three Keys to help it stay on the Ed's Desk (the top 5) this month.

Saffire thinks she's just an ordinary girl - until she experiences strange dreams and another reality on the Island of Midway, is chased by the Midguardian Serpent, walks through portals, learns the magical art of Mystification and battles against an evil Judge. The reason: young Saffire is the long-awaited True Muse.


"I was stunned."

"Without a doubt, one of the best books on the site..."

"I can see this would be a big hit with your target audience."

"This should be on bookstore shelves (or, I guess in this day and age, listed on Amazon.com and on the Barnes and Noble website). My favorite story on the website so far."


Many thanks for your support and kindness.


All the best, Sana


(If you have shelved SD in the past, apologies and please disregard this message)

By now you've probably gotten a lot of feedback on your pitch and opening scene. Let me know if there's a chapter you'd like me to review.

If you'd like, we could trade and you could look at my ch 27, which is succinct (a few hundred words) and captures the style and premise of my piece.

Thanks and good luck on here!

A fantasy tale awaits you never told before
Darkness Awakens is knocking on your door

Stories are told about pixies, elves, dragons, and much more
Magical spells, romance, adventures and suspenseful lore

I will have you on all two or perhaps three or four
May the story never become an outrageous bore

If you enjoy Darkness Awakens "back" it and ask for more!
If not be nice and throw it back out your door!

You’re probably aware that I read and backed your book in July. I’d be grateful if you’d consider backing my novel Fidelity. Thanks.

Hi Ryan

I wondered if you'd like to take a wee peek at The Prodigal Prophet, my autobiography set in Northern Ireland and Southern California. It's a mix of The Wizard of Oz and The Pilgrim's Progress - no preaching contained in it so safe to read!

OR

If you've already read it, sincere apologies. You might like to have a look instead at my latest book, 'Mystical Musings - Prodigal Prophet Style'. Here's my pitch for it!

'Tired of Packaged Religion - then jump into this new stream of Irish Mysticism and common sense.'

Blessings

Charlie

Hello Ryan, writing the book is the easy, and most enjoyable, part. Uploading is a bit convoluted but not impossible. The degree of difficulty, however, increases when trying to get others to read it. To get backing, and preferably with comments, is an accomplishment. You need the tenacity & thick skin of a door to door salesman. So, knock knock! Would you care to exchange reads? (And yes, this is Spam.) Thanks for your time. Bocri

I know we’re all busy and nagging is irritating but I see on my list I commented on and backed your book a month ago. Wondering if you can squeeze in time to look at mine: GRAIN OF SALT – and give me a boost. I’m in 3rd place – need to stay there for 6 more days - but it’s hard to compete here with all the vampires and demons lurking about. Thanks for any boost you could give me. Burgio

Hi Ryan,

The reason for this message is that unfortunately, and it is my fault involving a major computer glitch and I did not back up my files, I have lost track of everyone who has supported me and whom I have supported. Trying to re-coordinate my message feed would be an almost impossible task. So please do not consider this to be a Spam message for that is not my intent.

I have recently decided to try to make a run at the Editor’s Desk in order to garner more feedback on my work on top of all of the good constructive criticism I have already received on this site, some of which I have incorporated into my two re-edits to date. I am currently in the process of a major re-edit, with outside help, and adding more than 20,000 words to bring my book up to full novel length.

So, if I have been remiss in not reading your book please let me know and I will be more than happy to read it and offer support and comments. If you have already backed me, thank you. It is greatly appreciated. If not, all as I ask is for you to read as much of my book as you care to and then decide if my work is worthy of your support. Once again, thank you.

Good luck in your writing endeavours.

My best regards,
Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

would you care to swap reads, backing and/or critical comments? Let me know. I return all favors. Hope to hear fom you. I would be eternally grateful.

cheers
blueboy

Hi, I had the pleasure of reading and backing your book a while ago. I’d be grateful if you could have a look at Jabin. Thanks.
Bev

I’m hoping my story might be on your list, but I’m not sure how to ask politely because there are so many different expectations about return reads. Perhaps I can tell you that I did like and back your book on July 27, and I’d be grateful to know if you consider my novel Fidelity good enough to back. Thanks for what you’ve contributed here and good luck with your writing! If only we were paid by the hour.

Benjamin Dancer

hiya Ryan, i'm curious as to your take on crier of kathmandu; appreciate even a short read. best, a

I know it’s hard to get your bearings in here at first. It does get easier. And we have lives to live. I understand how hard it can be to keep up. So there could be a million reasons why I haven’t heard back from you. I just wanted to remind you that I backed your book. I would be very grateful if, at your convenience, you’d considered backing my novel Fidelity. Thank you.

I know that writing a book is hard, lonely work, so I hope you have the reward of finding an audience. Good luck!

Benjamin Dancer

Hey Ryan! If you like fast-paced crazyness please consider taking a look at any of my works, will return a read ;)

Many thanks Ryan. Much appreciated.
If you've time to look at Little Krisna, I'd be very grateful.
Best wishes, Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS