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Morven James wrote 18 hours ago   

HI Liz,
Another great chapter, I'm sorry it's only one this time, I'm running a little behind with reads, but I will certainly return to read more.
All best wishes,

Michael Jones wrote 20 hours ago   

Took this week off work to finish the first draft ... and it is now complete! Now the hard work begins.

I will be leaving it up this time, which means if it should ever reach the desk, I'll probably be at an age where I've forgotten how to type let alone written a book. (Although a slap from you sounds like it might be fun. :))

Have you been encouraged to finish Avonia (wtf does the new title mean???) I hope so.

How bloated are you from eating all that chocolate ... piggy Lizzie.

Andreea Daia wrote 2 days ago   

Hi again, Liz--

As promised, I posted my comments. I loved the fact that you don't patronize the children. There was no "X was so and so" which is a problem I found with lots of kids stories on this site. And I think you have all the elements HC said that such a novel needs. So yes, this is very good and I'll try to return to read more.

Thank you for the fun and the wonderful twist on SF.

Lindsay Cross wrote 2 days ago   

Just wanted to introduce myself. Would you mind taking a look a my book. I can return in kind.

Lindsay Cross

Andreea Daia wrote 2 days ago   

Hi Liz--

Thank you so much for spending some of your free time to check out my book and comment on it. And thank you for your very encouraging comments on my writing and plot. It means a lot especially since you aren't a SF fan. You give me hope that I can actually reach the ED by the end of May. I'll try at least.

I'll check out your story in an hour and I'll have your comments by the end of the day.

Thank you again for your very encouraging words!

Beibhinn wrote 2 days ago   

I meant to thank you for the critique on my book, thanks. Currently trying to get stuck into it with a teething grumpy baby thanks though.

Noah Sinaloa wrote 2 days ago   

Hi Liz, thanks for taking a look at my book and for your kinds words about it.

P Clifford Mills wrote 3 days ago   

The cover stays for now. I paid $25 for the image on Duane will keep his shorts on!
Tks for your interest, LizX.

Andreea Daia wrote 3 days ago   

Hi Liz–

Would you be interested in a swap read? I write science-fiction, which I’m not sure how well fits your tastes.

If swapping is even an option, would you mind checking out my first 3 paragraphs or so, to make sure that my writing style suits you? If not, that’s perfectly all right—I just don’t want to make anyone read 3,000 words if my writing is not their cup of tea.

Thanks for your time and have a good day!

P Clifford Mills wrote 4 days ago   

Hi LizX,
I was pleased to receive your lengthy and entertaining review of my book "Working Men". I think I agree with you that the novel isn't really erotica. I'm changing its genres, based on your comment and another received today. The market has spoken!

Meanwhile, I look forward to reading and commenting on your own work "Avonia -The Quest". A young person's novel should be an interesting challenge.

Cliff Mills
"Working Men"

Cameron Sinclair wrote 5 days ago   

Hey guy, Just looking for some feedback on something I’ve been working on for a while. Any comments or suggestion would be greatly appreciated! If you got time, please check out Dead Star.
Cheers Cam.

Michael Jones wrote 5 days ago   

What's the point in having a bottle party and not being hungover the next day?

Happy Easter ... don't work too hard. :)

Morven James wrote 6 days ago   

Thank you Liz, its always good to have a new friend, and I look forward to reading more,

Morven James wrote 6 days ago   

Hi Liz,
I shuffled my reading list, and I'm so pleased I did, this was a joy to read, and I will return for more, it may take a week [long list] but I will return,
All best wishes,

Morven James wrote 6 days ago   

Hi Liz,
Thank you so much for backing The Third Eye, your support is really appreciated.
I will of course come to read your book - Hopefully, within the next two days.
All best wishes,

rcames wrote 6 days ago   

Hi there,

Thanks for the input on The Download. I do struggle with finding a "home' for my little story. I'll take your comments to heart.

Michael Jones wrote 7 days ago   

Fair enough. There's no rush, btw. Hope this morning finds you well and not hungover. Or ... take 2 x Paracetamol and go back to bed.

AliyaM.books wrote 8 days ago   

Hi! Would you be willing to take a look at my new fantasy/romance novel Wolf Heart? Here is the premise: When Andrea wakes up in a log cabin in the middle of the woods, she can't remember who she is or where she came from. All she knows is that she almost drowned in a river and her rescuer, a handsome but mysterious boy, is determined to help her. Can she trust him and his mother? Why do they live in the woods? Are they hiding something? Andrea, must unveil the truth about her rescuers in order to find the truth about herself.

Michael Jones wrote 9 days ago   

New start is up. Have split C1 and added a new C2 re: antagonist. Would love your thoughts.

Do you want me to delete that forum thread?

I will drink with you on Wednesday ... in spirit .... hahaha

Michael Jones wrote 10 days ago   

I think you should concentrate on reading and reviewing children's lit on here, then you might get the attention you deserve.

Go get 'em, Lizzie.