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jrevino wrote 217 days ago   

Hello, my name is James Revino. I am the author of ‘Hollow.’ I was wondering if you might be able to take a look at my work and tell me what you think, good and bad. Any critique would be much appreciated, it is the best way to improve. Of course, if you wanted to back it, that would be great as well. Have a good day, and thanks for your time.




ubulord wrote 249 days ago   

"The Prince and the Singularity – A Circular Tale" is a book with one big advantage, one only needs to read the first 40 lines to know whether one is going to like the story or not. If after the first 40 lines you're not hooked, no need to bother reading the rest.

Chris Bostic wrote 250 days ago   

Hey, R,
You are welcome. Nice to have you on YARG, and glad you found the comments helpful.
Look forward to seeing yours whenever you have a chance.
Have a great weekend!
-Chris

Lucy Middlemass wrote 251 days ago   

Hello R. Swain,

You're welcome. Do let me know when you've updated - and post about it on YARG too.

Lucy :)

Alice Barron wrote 252 days ago   

Hi R,

Would you like to do a swap read?

"The bed next to mine"

Alice.

Lucy Middlemass wrote 252 days ago   

Hello R.Swain,

I would like to invite you to join YARG, the young adults’ reading group. It's a great way to attract attention to your book and to receive reviews and backers.

http://authonomy.com/forums/threads/103435/young-adult-reading-group-yarg-iii-/

The details are in the first post of this thread. If you’d like to join, either post you name and book title on the thread or message me. I’ll be delighted to welcome you on board.

Lucy

patio wrote 255 days ago   

Dear R
Would you mind back and/or appraise/proofread a chapter (or part) of my book? I would appreciate. Expect the same support from me

Shelby Z. wrote 257 days ago   

Ahoy there ,
Sorry for this spam but there are just too many of you, so here is a plug for my book Driving Winds.

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Please read, comment, rate, and perhaps consider backing this daring adventure on the high seas,
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Trailer Bride wrote 259 days ago   

Hi there

I'd be grateful if you could spare the time to take a look at my book, Starshy, and let me know what you think.

http://authonomy.com/books/46148/starshy/

I'd appreciate your comments, and I return all reads.

Thanks a lot

Evie

mdws77 wrote 261 days ago   

Thanks for accepting my friend request. If you need help, I do mean it when I say to send me a message. I hope you can check out my book and maybe back it down to the top 5, with your help. Good luck, have a very nice day and have fun on the site.

jrevino wrote 266 days ago   

Hello, my name is James Revino. I am the author of ‘Hollow.’ I was wondering if you might be able to take a look at my work and tell me what you think, good and bad. Any critique would be much appreciated, it is the best way to improve. Of course, if you wanted to back it, that would be great as well. Have a good day, and thanks for your time.

mdws77 wrote 268 days ago   

Since you have space on your shelf, I would like to invite you to consider my novel called Solian Chronicles: Pluto Genesis. It is a positive Science Fiction novel of the near future that has gotten some very good reviews. If you could rate and back, that would be greatly appreciated. Thank you for your consideration and I hope you have a good day.

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awomaninspired wrote 272 days ago   

Hi there! I just wanted to say “hi” and introduce myself. My name is Michelle, and I am a Christian non-fiction writer here on Authonomy. I am new, but would love to help you in any way I can.

I have four books here, but would appreciate it so very much if you would take the time to comment and review just one:

http://authonomy.com/books/47250/a-woman-inspired-collection-1/

I know you may not agree with the content, and that’s okay. I would simply love your opinion on the introduction and my general writing style.

My first book is the one most readers seem to identify with because it is born out of my life experiences. To sum it up, I would say it’s about finding the extraordinary presence of God in the ordinary course of life.

My second book is in a "Dear Abby" format, and the answers can be quite cut and dry.

My third and fourth books are in the style of uplifting daily devotionals.

But, to come and meet me and my amazing family, which I truly hope you will...you'll find us in the first book. :)

I hope my stories put a smile on your face today, and warmth in your heart.

Thank you so much for your time! I will review and comment on your book in return.

I also have shelf space, and if I love your book, I will shelve it and back it!

Warmly,

Michelle

ubulord wrote 275 days ago   

"The Prince and the Singularity – A Circular Tale" is a book with one big advantage, one only needs to read the first 40 lines to know whether one is going to like the story or not. If after the first 40 lines you're not hooked, no need to bother reading the rest.

patio wrote 276 days ago   

Greetings dear friend, would you mind back and/or appraise/proofread a chapter (or part) of my book? I would appreciate. Expect same from me

rook wrote 347 days ago   

Hello R.Swain

I wonder if you could spare a little time to take a look at my children's book, Speedy McCready.

Best wishes
Debbie

JMF wrote 364 days ago   

Hi R
Just wondered if you would be interested in reading my children's/young teens book called Shadow Jumper? Any comments much appreciated.
All the best
Julia

SWORDMUZIC wrote 367 days ago   

Hello R.Swain,

Can you have a look at my work" CATACOMBS" and comment?

http://authonomy.com/books/44127/catacombs/

Thx & Rgds
SWORDMUZIC

Adam Thurstman wrote 370 days ago   

Hi R Swain

If you have time I'd be ever so grateful if you could please take a quick look at my book.

Kindest regards
Adam