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From Diane Sojah
Abidjan Cote’ivoire

Hello Dear,

Please I will like you to consider to accept this my proposal despite that it will be suprise to you since we have not known or written before. My name is Diane Sojah i am from Sierra Leone in west Africa.I am a girl of 20 years old , I wish to request for your urgent assistance in my investment plans in your base, I wish to invest in manufacturing and real estate management in your base, this is because Inherited an important sum from my late father who was poisoned to death recently.

My father was a very good business gold and cocoa merchant based in Accra, Ghana and Abidjan (Ivory Coast), he was poisoned to death by his business associates on one of their business trips recently. Before his sudden death, He called me on his bedside at the hospital and told me that he has a sum of $6.5 Million USD deposited in one of the prime bank here in Abidjan Ivory Coast In west Africa , that he used my name for the next of kin in depositing of the fund.


1.) To provide a bank where this money can be transferred into.
2.) To make arrangements for me to come over to your country after the successful transferring of this money into your account, to come and further my education because I want to study medicine over there in your country.
3.) To help me invest this money in a profitable business since i am only 20yrs of age and do not know about business.
4.) To sponsor transfer this money into your account.

Please I want to invest this money in a very good business area over there in your country, this money was been deposited for my social security and for fruitful international investment. My late father has an agreement with the bank that I should provide a foreign partner of my choice that will help me receive this money for an investment purpose in overseas. That is why I need you to help me provide a good bank account where the bank that is holding this mo

Hi Suzanne. I was reading profiles to see who might want to read my book and came a cross your page. I don't often find someone as new as you on this site, welcome aboard.

This may be a little premature because you're not set up yet and I don't know what you like, so let me just make you aware of my book: A PLACE IN LIFE. It's literary fiction about the life of a boy told through a series of catastrophic events and failed relationships. When you have a chance I'd appreciate it very much if you'd take a look at a chapter or two and let me know what you think. Also remember, if it doesn't come up to your standards, all you have to do is stop reading - no strings.

In any event, many thanks for your time.

Old Bob
A PLACE IN LIFE