Hi Laura...hope all is well in the pursuit of a publisher. I read your short testimony in the CCRG forum recently. I think of the Apostle Paul...God is the master of turning darkness into light. Also read in a post long ago that you do not particularly like to do critiques. I am not always that great at them either as I lack an English studies background and do not know much about first person or second person perspective, pace, characterization, etc.
Anyway, my books are up for review in the CLF, and I would value your opinion on a few select chapters...could you read chapters 3 and 9 in The Christian Church in the Last-Days, write a short critique in the book's "comments" section, and then post it in the CLF. I think you will like these chapters and hopefully will be a blessing to you. Thanks, and praying for writing and publishing success for you. God bless, Bart.