Great to have you on-board, my friend!
You're first-name is awesome! haha!!
But seriously, I like some of your fav published books, as I'd read David Gemmell years and years ago. It was a copy of his first novel, Legend, and I remember thinking it seemed really basic on the page, but perhaps that's what got him so widely-read to the 'legend' he now is...
So now that you're here, please have a read of "Heights of Obsession" as I updated Chapter One late last night, and upload it this morning. It reads better, as my changes were based on recent feedback; so enjoy!
Like I said; its great to have you on-board, so happy reading!