Your work is very readable and flows well. You also cover the mechanics and emotions of the subject matter well. I thought the mom hanging around was hilarious, just like the real ones do in your head. Scott Rhine Houses of the Holy

Well written, quirky, and a fun MC. I want to see where this story goes, so I'm backing! Camille Curse of the Golden Fly

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline and created a most memorable main character in Meredythe. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing ensures that your fantasy will appeal to the YA audience. Backed with pleasure. Andrew Burans The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

An excellent addition to the genre. Perfect for your chick lit audience in every way. BACKED

Evening Tiffany. i only read chs 1, 3 and 5, but hopefully gave me a good overview. i like the first person style. I often find myself writing like that, I find it can be more endearing. Your story line appears very interesting and draws the reader in. So well done. BACKED. I would appreciate if you would return the favour and look at my childrens' book called Paperbats. Many thanks. Jerry [paperbat]

Excellent. Backed with pleasure Abel Kane The Alchemists' Cookbook

Cool stuff, and so far... no vampires! I only read the first chapter though. I like getting dropped right into the maelstrom and trying to figure things out along with the characters. I'm guessing things have been pretty rough for this crew because when Rory-James found Meredythe covered in blood, he didn't freak... If I found ANYONE covered in blood, I'd freak... but I'm just a desk-jockey. So shelved. Best of luck Dan. Demons and Other Inconveniences

You kind of lost me with the killing of the cat, as an animal lover don't really like to read about animals being abused or killed. Anyway your writing is solid and flows exceptionally well. An intriguing read that promises much. Great work Happily shelved Melxx

Very enjoyable, endearing book. I loved the storyline, chick lit and fantasy go very well together in my opinion and you've done it masterfully. My biggest compliment is that I would definitely buy this, it was a pleasure to read the bit that I did. Missy

Perfect Chick-Lit /Fantasy- ahh the old mother- daughter relationships has withstood the test of time! This is a well written novel and polished to perfection. BACKED with pleasure Liz The Cheech Room

Enjoyed first chapter and pitch. Backed with pleasure Hatts

great story --backed anba L.O.V.E

This is great writing! Backed.

Tiffany I like your premise, the notion that Meredythe can raise from the dead, and she has a particular raising with the Faerie King. I think your opening is weak, and needs more conflict in the first few paragraphs. Also, in your pitch, I think you need to make clear who Meredythe's enemy (nemesis) is, and how she will struggle against that enemy, and what her weaknesses are. The writing is good to excellent. I think the plot needs some work... more conflict, and clarity on the nemesis. Hope this is helpful. Shelved. Frank

hey good story, its great fantasy i dont like the chick lit part but the rest is good. goodluck.