Thanks j.f johns. It really means a lot to me! I'll keep writing and read yours next ;)

Hey! well I started reading your book, only done some chapters but I'll keep goingg! its really interesting! I love vampire books but its hard to find them on this sitee and this is the typical book I would soo buy in a shop!!!! I think it would do great in the YA market!! Okay, I'm not very good with criticism because I'm never sure about gramatical mistakes or stuff like that, although I did read some gramatical mistakes(nothing you cant change with edit) the idea sounds really cool, plus I've read thousands (well, okay, maybe not thousands) of vampire books and this is truly original!! so I think it would do great! Pluss, its one of the few books I've really realllyyyy enjoyed reading on the site (cuz most of the books on the site aren't aimed at YA and arent fantasy which is what I like) so I have to say, great job!!! By the way, the cover is beautiful, dont change it!:) now, gramatical and writen I can't really say cuz I'm the person with most gramatical mistakes on thiss site so..xD but if it comes in use, I'm 18 and love vampire books and fantasy, so as I saidd before, this book would totally call my attention because of the cover and the story starts really good, it makes you keep reading because you dont know whats going on at the begining! and the MC Slania, I pretty much like her, she isn't the typical character you get in most books! well, I'm not sure this comment helped much, but at least its heres with some advice from a young readerr xd :) best of luck!!=D