Authonomy - Comments for SQUEEZED - By Linda J Galvinhttp://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/Authonomy - Comments for SQUEEZED - By Linda J Galvinhttp://authonomy.com/Images/Jacket/28.jpgSQUEEZEDhttp://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/Comment from lizjrnm - 03/03/2012 23:01:01
This is quite insightful - an important read - on my shelf tomorrow! liz
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/#comment_853860Sat, 03 Mar 2012 23:01:01 GMTComment from By-Dana - 11/11/2011 21:30:01
With a good editing, I'm sure this will be a good resource for people who are dealing with loss. I wish you the best of luck with Squeezed. God Bless, Dana P. Finding Xanadu and The Journey Home
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/#comment_816985Fri, 11 Nov 2011 21:30:01 GMTComment from S.C. Thompson - 07/11/2011 02:35:21
Good, good message, good help for those who ache with loss, good poem. I think you've done admirable work here.
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/#comment_815757Mon, 07 Nov 2011 02:35:21 GMTComment from S.C. Thompson - 07/11/2011 02:35:21
Good, good message, good help for those who ache with loss, good poem. I think you've done admirable work here.
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/#comment_815757Mon, 07 Nov 2011 02:35:21 GMTComment from Warrick Mayes - 06/11/2011 20:07:37
Linda, I couldn't get your first sentence "Know that whatever we are in gifted in life," I also think you need to swap "me" for "be" in "My first inkling of that there had to me more..." Also, remove the "a" from "...it was a an empty shell..." There were some other sentences that did not ring true, and you need to review some of your punctuation, but this promises to be a powerful story - or true-life drama? I don't know what has happened with your upload, but the first chapter is repeated about foru times. Regards Warrick
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/#comment_815667Sun, 06 Nov 2011 20:07:37 GMTComment from name falied moderation - 05/11/2011 14:10:36
Wow, I see already you are moving in the right direction. Good luck
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/#comment_815338Sat, 05 Nov 2011 14:10:36 GMTComment from Joythi - 05/11/2011 13:24:54
thank you for the comment, yes I am publishing more chapters. keep looking[QUOTE] Hello and welcome Linda, Well, this is a different view on a subject that many really dont wish to face. I have not read it all as I just had to get to bed, ( compelling )but be assured I will continue for you have grabbed me. I see your book is incomplete, PLEASE put more up and give us the opportunity to follow your insights. [ENDQUOTE]
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/#comment_815330Sat, 05 Nov 2011 13:24:54 GMTComment from name falied moderation - 05/11/2011 12:30:06
Hello and welcome Linda, Well, this is a different view on a subject that many really dont wish to face. I have not read it all as I just had to get to bed, ( compelling )but be assured I will continue for you have grabbed me. I see your book is incomplete, PLEASE put more up and give us the opportunity to follow your insights.
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/38711/squeezed/#comment_815321Sat, 05 Nov 2011 12:30:06 GMTComment from name falied moderation - 05/11/2011 12:30:06
Hello and welcome Linda, Well, this is a different view on a subject that many really dont wish to face. I have not read it all as I just had to get to bed, ( compelling )but be assured I will continue for you have grabbed me. I see your book is incomplete, PLEASE put more up and give us the opportunity to follow your insights.
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