Authonomy - Comments for Crightent - By Cameron Ervinhttp://www.authonomy.com/books/42583/crightent/Authonomy - Comments for Crightent - By Cameron Ervinhttp://authonomy.com/images/jacket/Authonomy_Jacket_1403201231147764.jpgCrightenthttp://www.authonomy.com/books/42583/crightent/Comment from Kenneth Edward Lim - 05/04/2012 03:20:35
Cameron, You started with a lot of energy and kept the level up, carrying us along with your first person narrative. Corr with his fun-loving youthfulness proves to be a swashybuckling hero one can't help but cheer on. "Crightent" does deliver what the blurb promises with the help of an easy, coversational style and spiffy dialogue. Thanks for the rollicking good read. Kenneth Edward Lim The North Korean
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/42583/crightent/#comment_863724Thu, 05 Apr 2012 03:20:35 GMTComment from Kenneth Edward Lim - 05/04/2012 03:20:35
Cameron, You started with a lot of energy and kept the level up, carrying us along with your first person narrative. Corr with his fun-loving youthfulness proves to be a swashybuckling hero one can't help but cheer on. "Crightent" does deliver what the blurb promises with the help of an easy, coversational style and spiffy dialogue. Thanks for the rollicking good read. Kenneth Edward Lim The North Korean
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/42583/crightent/#comment_863724Thu, 05 Apr 2012 03:20:35 GMTComment from riantorr - 29/03/2012 02:19:37
A character stuck in a life they do not what is a great set-up that most people can understand. Wow, 57,000 words! I'm always amazed by that. I have trouble cracking 40k! Rian Torr
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/42583/crightent/#comment_861592Thu, 29 Mar 2012 02:19:37 GMTComment from DerekTobin - 16/03/2012 11:47:14
Hi Cameron I enjoyed reading through this first chapter and think you have got your young protagonist off to a nice start in his adventure. The young hero called to adventure - given the setting -I was getting some Luke Skywalker vibes and that cant be a bad thing. It's impressive that you wrote this when you were only 13 - good job. I have starred and added to my watchlist and will read more and comment as I go. Well done. Derek The Angel Chord
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/42583/crightent/#comment_857958Fri, 16 Mar 2012 11:47:14 GMTComment from DerekTobin - 16/03/2012 11:47:14
Hi Cameron I enjoyed reading through this first chapter and think you have got your young protagonist off to a nice start in his adventure. The young hero called to adventure - given the setting -I was getting some Luke Skywalker vibes and that cant be a bad thing. It's impressive that you wrote this when you were only 13 - good job. I have starred and added to my watchlist and will read more and comment as I go. Well done. Derek The Angel Chord
]]>http://www.authonomy.com/books/42583/crightent/#comment_857958Fri, 16 Mar 2012 11:47:14 GMTComment from CJE - 14/03/2012 03:03:15
Sorry about the way the pages were uploaded. It sure didn't look like that when i typed it up. I started writing this book when i was 13 and didn't finish it until i was 15. I'm sure you can tell that by the way the writing matures as you read through it.
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