Have enjoyed what i have read - will comment in more detail when i have time - i've put your book on my shelf! Have a look at mine if you get some free time. Adam view book

First of all i like the way the narrator keeps repeating his name "Dick...." which already emphasises that she finds him irritating and that the reader knows he'll be dead soon. Also the fact that she points out the time - 10:55 - so the reader knows like she knows that he'll be dead in 5 minute... view book

I'm putting you on my bookshelf to read later due to your fantastic blurb. Check out mine too if you get a minute! Cheers. view book