Bravo's Veil Michael, thank you for the invite to read Bravo's Veil. I offer critical suggesions with the caveat I am not only one person with one opinion for you to take or toss but hopefully you will find some value in my comments. Ch. 1 - The writing here was very smooth and flowing, althou... view book

Test Pilot's Daughter - Revenge As per your request, I've taken a look through the first few chapters. I offer my thoughts and comments with the caveat that I am just one of many people on Authonomy, and my opinion is of no greater merit than anyone else's, and you must take what you wish and tos... view book

Hey, Mat, I never said I wouldn't take a look, just it is not my normal read! For all it's worth, I've some thoughts for Wrong Place, Wrong Time. Pitch - Perhaps because of my normal comfort zone, this didn't quite work for me. Grand, sweeping statements really did not give me insight into what ... view book

The Flame Bringer – I offer you my thoughts after shelving your novel because it is promising and enjoyable, I hope you find something of use but of course you must take what you will and toss what you must. Pitch – you only have 200 words, choose them wisely! Lots of people will claim their novel... view book

Overlooked - I am less a student of literary fiction than other genres, but hope that you will find some merit in suggestions which have tightened and strengthened my own manuscript on its way to publication. I will admit, first person is not my first choice for narratives although it looks like you... view book