I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great comment. Lots more chapters up now for you to check out if you want. :) Stuart view book

Well, what can I say other than this blew my mind, it's that good! Your descriptions are visceral and so well observed that I am drawn in, able to see the events unfolding in front of me. The use of first person is balanced perfectly here, with engaging self reflection and keen account of outward ev... view book

This is going to do very well! The preface gives us a great introduction into the mind of a psychopath. It seems very well researched. Ben's outwardly good looking appearance really adds to the tension, emphasising the idea that it is not always the socially awkward outcast who ends up being the ... view book

I read the first three chapters and instantly loved it. This is one book I will definitely be returning to! I love the way you describe Percy and his harrased scatty nature, which contrasts perfectly against Cuthberts relaxed sarcastic attitude. Your use of metaphors and similies are brilliant and ... view book

I absolutely love this. The dialogue is natural and believable. The characters are bold and come to life. To me I can see them in my mind very clearly. I plan to read the whole of this as soon as I have a chance!. I'm sure this will do really well. Only small thing I would say is that at the very st... view book