I love the depth of the narrative in the opening as it draws me onwards and takes me into the work. If a work does not have a start of this quality I find it difficult to continue. This is was gets me into a book and what I aspire to write. A good book. Brondby Scott Praying To Dead Gods & Kiss... view book

I do read childrens books in German, Spanish and French to help me learn, but always try to find some historical fiction so that I do not bore. Your story is not for me, but my daughter would love this. It is quick and humourous and would entertain her a great deal. I could picture the characters... view book

Have read 3 chapters. I felt like I was there with your character, but did not feel any empathy with him. His loss in the first chapter was not my loss and I prefer to feel closer to the protagonist when I read, however I still wanted to continue his journey with him. The physical environment in w... view book

Interesting opening that drew me onwards with an easy style and kept pomising rewards for continuing with the read. It is not transparent, neither is it elusive causing one to think 'what the hell is this about'. I need to read a little more to give better feedback Brondby Scott Praying To De... view book

I read your summary of the book and thought 'oh no', but have read the first chapter and enjoyed it much to my delight. I will come back and read more. (I don't have my own internet connection and steal the time when I can.) Style is different for all of us and for me loads of short paragraphs lea... view book