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Pearl has been picked up by a fabulous agent, so I've taken it down from here.If you want to keep up with what's going on with Pearl, please become a fan on my Pearl Edda Facebook page: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Pearl-Edda/115706391784577Thanks! Best wishes to all of you!
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THE AWAKENING. Good read. I wasn't sure if the main character was male or female in the opening paragraphs (chapter 1 not the Prologue). If you could establish that right away, it will help the reader keep up with what's going on. Otherwise, I really liked the intrigue set up by the Prologue.
STOLEN Childhood: I read your entire story yesterday and today I thought about it often. I was drawn in first by the Norwegian background and then by the rawness of the writing. Praise God for the ending. You have a powerful story. Thank you for sharing it here.
WHITE MOUNTAIN: You have painted quite the picture in this first chapter. The mountain, the dragon, the wizard. I like the melding of ancient and contemporary. I also like the creativity. A couple things: Since this is YA, I would start this first chapter with "Where have you been?" The descriptions...
ON YOUR Mark, Get Set, Stop: I like this. Kylie has a great voice and I totally related with her not wanting to move away from CA. I read through chpt. 3 and will keep it on my radar to come back and read more. Well done!
BEHIND THE HOOD: Dark, gritty, real. You are an expert storyteller. I loved getting the perspectives from each of the characters, and you did it seamlessly by giving just enough insight and moving the plot along chapter by chapter. Really, really well done! Let me know when you upload more. Dagnabit...