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Hi Dan. You have certainly put lots of research into your story and executed it well. Really powerful plot. Mike and Clint are great main characters and you paint them well. I'm sure the genre will love this. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx)
Hi Neil. What an enchanting tale. The family are really great and their Grandad is really adorable. The letter they found was intriguing and a great way to end the first chapter. I'm sure kids will love this. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx)
Hi Lily. I thought your format was interesting as are your characters. There is a simplicity about your writing that makes it easy to follow and you bring your characters to life beautifully. I think your title is great. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx)
Hi Stephen. This really is an enchanting tale and you have a unique style to your writing. You have captured the fairytale atmosphere perfectly. Loved the bits of humor and the use of dialogue. The girl and boy chapter was really well described and I liked the woodman's character too. Backed and be...
Hi LFK. What a brilliant adventure. I thought you voiced the closeness of the family really well. Loved Jamie and the way he views things. The little explanations at the end of chapters were helpful and interesting. I think the plot line of the gold rush is great and the sort of story that is enjoye...