Hi :-) I've only read the first chapter for now but enjoyed it so have put it on my shelf. I no longer do in-depth reviews on here, but I back what I like. Only one little thing stuck out, you have unbrella instead of umbrella. But otherwise, I loved how this was written and was into the story from ... view book

Love it! This is just the sort of thing I devoured in my childhood and which fed my love of books :-) I do hope this gets published, children will adore it I'm sure. Like someone said, this does remind me of Roald Dahl a little, but that's a huge compliment. Six stars and on my shelf. Tammy view book

Hi Jane, I've only read the first chapter for now but I like it. It's really well written and I didn't see any errors. There's a spacing issue in one place (tiny matter and easy to fix) when they're talking about no heat in the house until September. I don't like Frankie very much, she seems a bit... view book

Hi Rosemary :-) I’ve read the prologue and first 4 chapters, and I love that you have written a story about your great-grandmother! Too often our ancestors are black and white pictures in frames, we forget they were people too and I’m always curious as to their thoughts and passions. A wonderful sl... view book

Hi Marilyn, I’ve read all six chapters, got totally caught up in the story you’ve woven. Wonderfully descriptive (but not overly so) writing. I could picture certain settings very clearly. I felt for the girls, so young and to be forced into something so adult. I could totally understand why Sumati... view book