Hello Helen, Returning your read, apologies for my tardiness. i made some notes as I went along. Pitch: I don't usually read pitches as I find it more exciting to enter the text without any preconceptions. However, from just a quick glance at yours, I'd suggest that it might read better bro... view book

Hello Ruko, Returning your read, sorry for the delay. Busybusybusy these days and I only had time to peruse the first three chapters. I shall now present my worthless and tardy opinions! Firstly, I commend you on the change of title. I've always had an aversion to book titles that reference... view book

Hello CoeDee, I'm sorry for the late return read. I remember that you read all of my book and so I've been trying to set aside time to have a good crack at yours. Tonight I just had to recognise that I may never have that time, so busy is my life at the moment. I have read the first five chapt... view book

Hello Sara, Returning your read. I only had time to read the first four chapters. Usually, I make notes as I go along, but I got a bit caught up in things here. I'm not particularly adept at critiquing, mostly I just point out typos and the like - but everything I read felt supremely polished ... view book

Hello Helianthus, I told you I'd come! Actually, I forgot that I'd told you, but tonight I remembered. So, here I am. Ah, now, this is better. I could appreciate the craft in your last book; but it was all a bit Radio 4 Play For Today to me. Now, this one - well, I can't think of another r... view book