What a fun read. I love the characters and how they are growing with the story. I also had a look at the storyline breakdown. I would love to read more of this, please let me know when you put more up.
My shelf is full at the moment, but I will return to your book and put it up for support later on (if you add more chapters)
Best wishes John view book

It makes me want to go to Egypt
Needs a little tightening up yet it dose not stop it being a enjoyable story view book