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I'm nineteen years old, from New York. I've been recognized twice by the National Counsil of Teachers of English. I attend SUNY New Paltz, and am pursuing a degree in creative writing.

I have been working on my story for about four years now. I had my first brainstorm about it the summer before tenth grade.

Important: if we have agreed to a swap, put in your review what book you wanted to swap for. otherwise I cant tell who expects a read back and who is reading out of interest. Also, if I don't return the swap for a week, i forgot about you. Don't be shy about reminding me that I owe you a read.

favourite books

Marabou Stork Nightmare- Irving welsh
The Girl Next Door- Jack Ketchum
Girl, Boy, Girl- Savannah Knoop
Sarah- Jt Leroy
The Heart is Deceitful Above All Things- Jt Leroy
Different Seasons- Steven King
Lord of the Flies- William Golding

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my books

Stains

L. Sydney Davern

A gonzo-horror torture-porn cloaked in the skin of a transgressive Bildungsroman, “Stains” tells the tale of a hideous murder in a backwoods, white-trash neighborhood.


16-year-old Erin was powerless to stop her parents from abandoning she and her siblings. She could do nothing about her older brother and caretaker, Nate, going to prison, and even less about the sexual abuse he suffered while incarcerated or the stigma that he is branded with due to his perceived homosexuality. She can’t stop him from drinking himself to death or neglecting their toddler sister. And she tries not to care; after all, his despondence just means that he isn’t poking his nose into the adventures that she and her glue-sniffing crew embark on.

But when Nate kidnaps his rapist’s teenage brother, Erin and her friends suddenly have all the power in the world. With the helpless young victim at their mercy and the whole rest of the summer to keep themselves entertained, these youths are about to learn that when even God refuses to pay attention, nothing is taboo.

 

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Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 31 days ago

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Kate LaRue wrote 124 days ago

Hi Sydney! Just a quick message asking for help. You once had good th....

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Neville wrote 138 days ago

Hello, not for the squeamish, but I hope you take a look. Short pitc....

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I wrote 276 days ago

Hi, I’m here to swap for my novel “Stains”. Before I start, I’d like to say that I critique as I read, and that many of the stylistic “errors” that I tend to point out are largely a matter of personal preference, so feel free to disregard them if you disagree. I hope you find this helpful :) -Y... view book

I wrote 276 days ago

Hi, I’m here to swap for my novel “Stains”. Before I start, I’d like to say that I critique as I read, and that many of the stylistic “errors” that I tend to point out are largely a matter of personal preference, so feel free to disregard them if you disagree. I hope you find this helpful :) -Y... view book

I wrote 290 days ago

Your opening is exciting and strong; you describe the scene will without being too sadistic about it, which I think a more mainstream audience would appreciate. However, you immediately diverge from any excitement into a winey infodump about the character’s home life. The home life is in itself a ... view book

I wrote 290 days ago

I decided to give this a look. I was very skeptical at first; after all, if you had any really worthwhile advice, you'd already have made some kind of name for yourself. You don't really have the credentials to back up a How-To guide on writing, and it shows. All of the advice given is really obv... view book

I wrote 292 days ago

Hey there, this is a review for the horror critique circle. I really enjoyed what I read of this. I feel like very few writers can pull off particularly gory bits, but you do them well; they didn’t come off as cartoonish, and although I have a VERY strong stomach for blood and guts, some of your ... view book

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