This is a witty written book and it certainly will do extremely well when it goes on sale.The characters are described in detail as are Roger's thoughts. Although Roger's unfortunate life experiences and misunderstanding wife and aunt are painted colorful, I miss the drama that is between a couple ... view book

Your writing have a lightness about them. I like your style, I can see it all happening. Personally I wouldn't tell the reader that Julia is going to face up to unexpected events. The character are described in a colorful way. view book

A strong start. Easy to read and well developed phrases. For a moment I thought, oh no a prologue, boring. But I was wrong the situation of the boy gripped me. The last phrase leave the reader hanging, longing for more. view book

You obviously have put a lot of effort into the book. The phrases are well developed and this is actually the first manuscript on this site I've come across I will reading further than just a few pages. view book

Charles mus be a very hardy man to go swimming in the lake in February, but some people swim all year round. You use monologue to get the reader updated on the political situation of England instead of using the narrative voice or in a conservation with other characters , it's different and I'm not... view book