Intriguing. I liked the opening and the 'noise' that was happening from the TV. Then, it all went quiet. I saw the 'old man' and his description was vivid. His transfer to the basement - the telling of the cobwebs, the exsoskeleton, it is beautiful writing. Well done to reach the ed's desk. On... view book

I only read one chapter but that was enough to convince me how great this story is. I didn't get bored and I wanted to read on. The beginning grabbed me and I settled down to read, soaking in the atmosphere, the surroundings and the feeling of those poor children. Let's talk about the scenery fi... view book

D M, When I began to read this, I thought this will be a very good story. I wasn't dissapointed. Writing something like this renders people's hearts. I did find the words a little long-handed and maybe you need to tone that down a tad. "In nonentity in the capacity of maternity" - I didn't g... view book