monicashear recent comments

written 703 days ago
cherry

I love that you messaged me,I cant belive that i have missed such a great read!Your main character is very likeable and there is so much mystery surrounding the entire book that i will be back to read more.Im 5 staring this. view book

written 730 days ago
cherry

The idea of Christmas being boring almost made me run away,but i stayed and finished out. I love how you seem to mix seemingly spotless descriptional phrases and fluid dialogue all in one. A craft i wish i could get the nack of.
I will be back to read more,and perhaps next month I will clear a shelf space for you. view book

written 739 days ago
cherry

I think if this was a book,and i had a kid,i would definatly use this as a bedtime story. view book

written 739 days ago
cherry

I agree with Antonia,my mind tends to wander and i found myself getting lost in the pretty font. view book

written 739 days ago
cherry

I can really imagine this becoming a movie some day.Nice work! view book

written 739 days ago
cherry

The one thing that caught my attention was the seemingly impecible facts that you show throughout the book. The landscape reminded me of that of a poetry book. I will be back for more,watchlisted and starred :) view book

written 744 days ago
cherry

I will wait for more :)
Love everything so far view book

written 758 days ago
cherry

I really enjoyed reading your first chapter,it reminded me of myself when i was that age. I will be back to read more.
Watchlisted and starred :) view book

written 764 days ago
cherry

I read all the way to chapter 5. I liked it alot,but in chapter two i found myself being distracted by equal signs and @ signs that were randomly in the text.

5 stars :) view book

written 764 days ago
cherry

I have read all you have,and whenever you add more i will definatly be back.5 stars :) view book

written 765 days ago
cherry

I cant believe that a publisher has not snatched up this story view book

written 765 days ago
cherry

This is such an interesting concept,burning churches. You excell at it :) view book

written 765 days ago
cherry

This deserves to be published,one of the best fantasy books i have seen here
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written 766 days ago
cherry

When will you be adding more?I am dieing to know what will happen :) view book

written 766 days ago
cherry

First backing :) I really enjoyed what you have written so far,and i hope you will eventually add more. I hate an unfinished story. view book

written 766 days ago
cherry

At first i was bored,but then the writing really picked up. Congradulations on creating a diary formed book that flows and engages the reader :) Watchlisted view book

written 767 days ago
cherry

Some iffy momenys where you tend to speak in the past,and their are a few akward phrases,but otherwise its pretty good. view book

written 767 days ago
cherry

I read what you have all so far,and i really hope you will finish it soon. I havent laughed so hard at a book in so long.Opening paragraph was the best! view book

written 771 days ago
cherry

This is so cute! view book

written 772 days ago
cherry

I like this :)
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