Cypher Characters. Distinct and imaginatively conceived. Jack is the classic flawed hero. His relationship with Benedict is really well done and makes us fear for the safety of them both. Angus is good as the bullying evil villain of the piece, more hateful than any Luftwaffe pilot. Love intere... view book

Good characterisation. Harry is brought to life quickly and we warm to him. You use really in the opening two sentences which is a bit sloppy. Not sure you need either. view book

Good writing but you probably need to pick up the pace of the first chapter. Too much self pleasuring dialogue for my liking. view book

On my wl for future shelving. view book