What an intriguing tale. You have a very homespun manner of writing that encourages the reader to fall easily into the story. The imagery is lovely and the narrative flows easily. Backed with pleasure.

Meg Wearing
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Winter wheat would have been harvested in late spring, and there's nothing unusual about flowers being in bloom in the spring - Meg Wearing

Hi Meg
I love your story. It reminds me in a way of Little House on the Prairie. The thing that I thought was wrong though was that it opens in spring, with the crops and flowers in full bloom. Crops don't usually ripen until late summer, early autumn. Same with flowers. Just a pointer. There was a couple of typos I spotted in the first chapter. Two words needed the letter D at the end of them. Other than that you have a really remarkable story here, which I'm sure will do very well for you. You will have a wide audience with this read because I think it will appeal to all. High stars from me, and it will get a place on my WL and shelf in due time. Well done and thank you for sharing it with me.
Brian.

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A very compelling read. It pulls you in from the start wanting you to read more. The descriptive passages are lovely and the dialogue with its Irish lilt is wonderful. Backed with pleasure.

Meg Wearing
Charlie Parker's Corner Of The Prairie view book

Another winner, Brian. Good descriptive passages without going overboard. Excellent dialogue. Puts me in mind of Robert Parker. Backed with pleasure.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock On The Verandah view book

Though not my genre, I found this to be a well-written novel. I especially enjoyed the description of the annex - wonderful imagery, and believable dialogue. Backed with pleasure.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock On The Verandah. view book

An interesting anthology of charming tales - beautifully written with wonderful imagery. Best of luck with this.

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This is a very charming and fanciful read - very well written with lovely touches of humor. Highly starred and backed.

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This is a delightful story. Very well written with delicious dollops of humor throughout. Best wishes in achieving your goal on this site.

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This is a wonderful story. There are a couple of grammatical corrections needed - a semi-colon needed rather than a comma. But all in all it's a delightful tale. I love the dialogue and the descriptive passages regarding the sights of Dublin. Interesting that it's very much like my novel, A Shamrock On The Prairie with the difference being my heroine has just emigrated from Galway to the states and is being introduced to service in a grand house in Kansas.

Backed with pleasure.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock On The Verandah view book

A compelling novel - it really brings the Bible verses to life. Very well written with authentic sounding dialogue. Backed with pleasure.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock On The Verandah view book

This is a lovely tale. The action grabs your attention quickly and holds the reader's interest throughout. Very well written with crisp dialogue - lovely imagery and description. Highly starred.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock On The Verandah view book

This is a very charming tale - puts me in mind of Jude Devereux. I love the attention to detail, and the change in the tenor of the men's speech when she slips into the earlier time period. The only crit I found was the use of the term, baffoon; I believe you meant to use the word, buffoon.

I hope you do well on here.

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What a powerful tale. Your heart breaks for the two orphans. Beautifully written with wonderful imagery. Highly starred. Hopefully more readers will enjoy this heart rending story.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock On The Prairie view book

A very well written piece - an intimate look into the lives of people only read about previously in history books. Very enjoyable, especially the first chapter where Dana takes that plunge into the unknown separating herself from her beloved father. Very well done.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock On The Verandah view book

This is a beautifully written novel with wonderful imagery, detailed descriptive passages and authentic sounding dialogue. It is easily one of the best on the site. Giving it high stars.

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A beautifully written novel full of wonderful imagery, detailed descriptions and authentic sounding dialogue. This is easily one of the best on the site. A job well done.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock On The Verandah view book

What a charming tale - beautifully written with wonderfully descriptive passages and dialogue. I'm sure this will find its way onto many children's bookshelves. view book

A very engaging tale - well-written plus the dialogue flows smoothly. The technical jargon is impressive, but not overwhelming like a Crichton novel. The personal descriptions are also good. The only criticism I have is that I found the conversation about the characteristics of the fired cook a bit stilted. It seems a woman in her position would have just said I fired him because he was drunk and let it go at that. All in all a very enjoyable read.

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Very well written - enthralling plot. The dialogue is very script, and gives one the impression the author has a background in law. Backed with pleasure.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock on the Prairie view book

A delicious frolic - very Bridget Jonesish. Backed with pleasure.

Meg Wearing
A Shamrock on the Prairie view book