I have read chapters 1, 14 and 22. What a strange and interesting book. It begins comically - the concept of God chatting through his problems in a Diner with an ordinary mortal is excellent, and extremely well written. It won't please many Christians, but I suspect this isn't something that concern... view book

I have read the first and fifth chapter of this, and can really see this appealing to 10 to 14 year olds. The language is simple and the premise intriguing. There is a nice mix of detail (the description of the wall) and absence (the mother's death as a throwaway paragraph), which balances well to k... view book

I am not familiar with The Iliad, but what you are doing here is very clever. I read the first and seventeenth chapter, and believe you write well. The voices are true and subtly different (could they be a little more so?) and you do dialogue believably. The action zips along, but in an interesting ... view book

I have read the first chapter and will try to come back for more. This is engaging, full of unforced humour, good character and dialogue. There is much to enjoy - the reference to the motorway fiasco, just plonked in the first paragraph immediately grips the reader's attention, Brick's spiky interch... view book

I have read the introduction and chapter 17. You write extremely well. The introduction is scholarly, and makes me wonder whether you are an academic. Chapter 17, of course, moves into the memoir - because that is what this book is about. You use repetition effectively (rather than clunkily - a diff... view book