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written 823 days ago
cherry

I loved the Pink Ribbon and the McCoos... udderly (couldnt resist :) charming and they would look fab with bright beautiful illustrations. Particulary liked the eight legged turkey! Thank you for letting me read ... backed! view book

written 837 days ago
cherry

Hi JJ
Imaginative. Hoorah for Bastion! A frog with courage and style. Like the hissing language of the serpents.Good combination of dialogue and narrative which will work well for its readers. Lovely story... Backed! Happy New year!

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written 1162 days ago
cherry

Hi and many thanks for the message and snippet from your book. I love the style and tone of this. Definately magical and quite original. Well done! view book

written 1515 days ago
cherry

This was a fantastic opening! So well written and it flowed beautifully. Supermodels,drama, glamour...what more can we ask for? Love the characters and hope HC pick it up!! Backed view book

written 1518 days ago
cherry

Hi ...have just started reading..very original and certainly different. You have woven a good story here. I can see its doing well so well done and good luck with it. view book

written 1520 days ago
cherry

This is different and fun. Very imagintaive which kids will love . Love the talking Doors comments! Backed and well done! view book

written 1522 days ago
cherry

Hi
Well, I can see why this earned a star. A really great opening and totally intriguing! Betty has a warmth about her and we know she is going to get into trouble in this town! Im backing anyway although you have topped the charts/ view book

written 1624 days ago
cherry

Sorry for the delay...have just started reading! Poetic and beautifully described. You have a natural flair for description! Well done and shelved view book

written 1628 days ago
cherry

Hi Bob. Into chapter two and can see why this is in the top 5! So incredibly well written and classy! Well done and shelved! Its clearly going to be a cracking thriller so hope HC pick it up! view book

written 1630 days ago
cherry

Toatally original...great concept! Kids will love this idea and you have made the shoe a warm, endearing character! Well done. Love the spanish orange peel sentence...funny! Great stuff and shelved view book

written 1635 days ago
cherry

Hi! This was such a cool first chapter! I am intrigued enough to read on; thought Porter was a perfect dose of mystery and I am sure the reader will be in for a great ride.I read a lot of childrens work so it great to try something else. Its original and well, just different! Well done and shelved view book

written 1658 days ago
cherry

Hi! Sorry for the delay. Well, great start! The whole pirate theme is a clear winner with children. You have your chief character 'Jack' whom I am sure children will warm too.the pace was good, strong opening with the peril evident almost imediately. Be careful for example when you use phrases like 'his mum said in a distracted sort of voice'. It is more powerful to say ' Clearly distracted,his mum said....
Does that make sense? I have just edited and re edited mine and these were things I needed to cut with lots of advice of course! I found many instances in my own bok where I over wrote. When its tidied up and polished it does read better without. I love the feel of this and you write so well! Shelved! view book

written 1778 days ago
cherry

hi...lovely start to this. Absolutely love the name cromarty! Children will find it memorable! I like the story line and you keep it at an understandable language for youngsters. Plug this on the forums, its a great way to get more feedback and reads! Onto my shelf! Nice work! view book

written 1780 days ago
cherry

so sorry for delay!! had computer problems...will read tomorrow! view book

written 1780 days ago
cherry

hooray!!!! Well done and so many congrats to you!! view book

written 1793 days ago
cherry

such powerful writing and a perfect thriller/crime buster! You set a very dark scene and a great chapter hook..of course people will read on! It flowed extremely well too. Well done and heaps of luck with it. view book

written 1794 days ago
cherry

This is great! What a cool idea and well written. Love the whole setting, explanation of different ghost types! Glad you are staying firm and not changing things. I got into such a mess correcting and trying to adapt it to suit so many reviews. It was a huge mistake. I took time to pick what was really important but stay true to my idea. I really hope this goes far...shelved view book

written 1794 days ago
cherry

Ribaldane...what a delight, what make a great title too! The silver Trumpet is ace too! I liked this...perfect for children , lovely warmth to it and an exciting start that kids will want to read...onto my shelf !! view book

written 1795 days ago
cherry

funny!!! Lovely writing.The interaction between Cuthbert and the Bull..perfect... will read some more but you are shelved anyway! view book

written 1799 days ago
cherry

onto my wl if that's ok view book