There was a problem loading the chapter text when I was reading so I only got through the first three chapters before the message came up indicating an 'error'. Nevertheless, I read enough to convince me that this is a meaty read - engaging, individually defined characters, dialogue that both helps ... view book

I've read the first 4 chapters and here are my thoughts. I think you make a strong opening - establish character, create a strong sense of place and introduce some of what I imagine are going to be the key themes. Chpt. 2 gives us a lively scene in the pub with some effective contrast between the fo... view book

Found this an absorbing and engaging read which I'm sure would hold its intended audience. I found the characters believable and well rounded. The pace pulled the reader along and the plot provided enticing enigmas and cliff hangers. A couple of suggestions: I'd like to establish where I am right at... view book

Hi Ruth Just read the first 4 chapters of 'The Scream'. Not a genre I would normally choose but found this piece riveting. Think the use of a first person narrator who's lost his memory is an excellent device which works very well once Pierre is introduced.You evoke setting very effectively with at... view book