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Deep, Thoughtful, Expressive, and Philosophical. The way you narrate the philosophies effortlessly, reveals that you are a person with profound knowledge and wide reading.
The talent of the writer shines through out the chapters.
All the Best.

Liinsa Hines
Behind the Revolutions- An Untold Tale

Hi Fatema,
I couldn't help reading your book today! Usually, I read the first chapter to have a first impression but I finished the second chapter in a heartbeat already.

Well, this is quite an enjoyable read and I can easily say that it's a golden book for the genre's enthusiasts. Your descriptions are great and I liked the way you expressed your feelings and shared your observations. You're obviously full of wisdom and the philosophical approach to your book is my cup of tea.

I definitely want to read more, and for the time being, I just wanted to let you know that I'm hooked in to the core concept behind it.

6/6 stars from me!
Lucette- Ten Deep Footprints

I do like the esoteric, even poetic approach that the author has adopted for this near to fully autobiographical account of her experiences and views on past and present events. Quite frankly this is a breathe of fresh intellectual air after all the pap which dominates this website. I am reminded of Hesse's travels to the East in search of of the Bodhisattva and whole avant garde surrealistic movement. This is a wonderful place to explore and escape into, if you are fed up with sterile, homogenized, regulated world that government controlled modernity has enforced on liberated minds. There is a huge chasm between being a liberal and being a libertarian. One is a thinly disguised set of conformity disciplines, and the other is truly an approach towards nirvana. This work falls into the latter, and is just too damned good for Authonomy. It really needs to be presented to a much higher authority where it truly belongs. Starred very highly.

Clive Radford
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It is like a diary of a teenager. A very familiar scenario of school environment. Lots of tension and conflict. view book

So he was out with his friends while you had a new baby, invited to mothers for barbecue.
You stopped drinking again. You were happy in your new house.
Pregnancy or post natal depression again and his hursh treatment towards you.
Do people understand the irony? no they do not.
Oh, poor Zara..


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wow, what a story! It is intriguing, when she is told about she isn't a real Gypsy. Her Look throughout, distigushibly separated her from the other Gypsys.
The Dark chamber of the book storte, creates a bit of skepticalism. Oh, very impressive, when hw got the Greek hat out oh his coat, to impress her.

A good and big noble. An interesting and different story. view book

Interesting pitch so it is on my wl. view book

As you requested for critiques, here a few very important correction: The very 1st sentance should rewrite connected to the 2nd, as;
1) My dad told me once that he will never tell me anything again.
2) in 2nd paragraph it needs speach mark 'better to drive in silence' because you thought about it. Add i thought.
3rd and 4th paragraphs reads very well. Join the 5th paragraph to the 4th. Averall its written fine. Good dialogues.

She is a very caring sister to her brother and loving too. She gets love and satisfaction in retun. This is a very diferent story to most others here on this site. Goodluck!
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Your charrecters are very daring women.
This will make a good comedy movie. view book

Good conversation between them. Oh, it makes you feel creepy when the teenager looked out of winndow, oh, oh you created an intriguing situation here. When the door creeped opened.. oh.. the feeling.
Good imgination and and well written.
The gun store, the laboratory middle no where.
Right type of fiction book for the young adults. view book

Michael,
I read two chapters of your book, the Gospel of Grace. The Titile is interesting.
You have a good topic here together with your perspective and some background research.
I understand that you have a message that you're wishing to convey to people through your readers.
i am afraid, to tell you that your writing needs some correction. Whether you wrote your manuscript in a haste with your outbusting fascination and frustration, or hastened and uploaded in an unchecked conndition, your writing needs good proof reading. I am sorry to be negative Michael. Though your work is very interesting and eye opening for this era. I am afaraid to tell there are far too many random sentances to pinpoint. Good luck! If you want help please do not hesitate to approach. view book

I read your chapter one. Wow! very realistic, you created a cosy and loving family atmosphere. Your charrecter is very ambitious young lady, articulated too.
A very normal school environment and pupil and teachers are as a usual type of situation. Well mixture of charrresters there. Oh what a daring gang.
Very well written and appropriate for genre and aimed readers group. Good luck. Complete it, should do well.
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Poor girl. The couple fighting always, wondering howlong their marriedge will last.
Maexon, the angry boy, tolerates his brother.
Fanora is so drammatic during her flight.
The black blob. The SUV arrived and they jump inside.
A good fiction.
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Written in plain and easy reading format.
You have explained every moments very clearly.
Oh, by the way i didn't know men devide women in 5 categeries, inclusive of 4 were told by your charrecter's father and one extra that the charrecter thought of.
very dissapointed with teenagers love, that differs from teh charrecter's expectation.
Ok, the charrecter has a new hope now, lets see what happens next. Humorous. view book

Very philosophical, and expressive. Well written and informative book.
A good enchanting fiction for the genre group. view book

Suddenly, to Germany. A lots of conversation with husband, kids and the woman.
The woman is bit too much i supose.
She was so happy to find British English spoken person.
She does a lot with the kids.
What a struggle to get that fabric out of the bush, though the neighbours are caring.
A lots of charrecters and many interaaction.
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Oh my dear 'Robindronath', or Nikhil, Your one God reminded me of Robindronath Takhur(Tagore) you probably are aware of the 19th century's Poert and noble prize winner.

He expressed in his prayers for forgiveness, 'Chroma Koro moe provu, Vul jodi kore thaki khobu'.

Well very poetic and expressive natured you are. Weldone. view book

I fel for poor Adria. Poor girl has gone through so much in her life.
The poor child was abused then blamed and held quilty of her helpless situation that was caused by the evil man.

You are brave of writing the such painful experiences. Good that there is someone who makes her feel comfortable, that is Summy. Weldone. view book

Although it isn't my prefered genre, it is amusing. Your story is very enthrilling for your genre readers. You write very well. Your writing engages your readers from the begining with a very realistic scene. Soon you being your readers to their expected thrills.

It is full of actions, thrills and horrors. You knoow your readers expectation. You wrote it in a very plain English, to make it a easy read and kept the follow.

Weldone! view book

You have enticed your readers to it like if it was all real. welldone.
A lot of painful instances like walking through a memory lane., or a diary.
What a portrait you created of the of the dad, reallike.
The mothers effectionate and helpless situation.
Ah- ha the school and classrom, the fight with the bully girl.
The brother trying to help.
All blended well into the story.

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A big novel. well written, and interesting.
The sentances are simple and easy to read.
The conversation are well realistic.
The features are a bit mixed of the last century and modernised era.
Overal it is interesting and informative. view book