Saw this on a few shelves of a people I correspond with on this site and thought I'd have a look. I read a few chapters and I really love this idea. WL and starred fully. Will shelve as soon as room pops up :) Blessings! Jacki The Causter view book

Hi Diana! Read through chapter 3, great writing all around. Firstly, I would reconsider a dream sequence as your opening. Not having read your other comments, I am willing to bet someone has already mentioned that. Dreams and describing the weather (as openings) are two things that publishers... view book

I really don’t have anything negative to say about what I read. You have obvious talent. A few things I wanted to share: ‘Over time, most people got used to the smell of prosperity, one of the innumerable perks of living in the Big City. He was not one of them.’ I love this paragraph. But what I ... view book

Hey Sparks, Just read chapter one and much of chapter two. I really like the switch of pov from Alex to Claira. I also like that we see through the lens of a famous hunk and how down to earth he is. Very cool. Overall, an awesome idea. I'd be interested to see where this goes. It needs some e... view book

Hi Stuart! Thank you for inviting me to take a look at this. Like you, I am very much an animal lover and appreciate when people give them a voice. I do like your story so far, but there is tightening to the text that needs to be done. As far as big picture goes, the first problem I noticed was... view book