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written 1285 days ago
cherry

Although non-fiction is not H/Cs stong forte on Authonomy, am pleased to back you work. While the world of healthcae is not my specialty (I am fomer professor of economics), once you have completed the wok to be published you should have no trouble in finding a commecial publisher (or at least an agent) to tun it ito a profitable endeavor. If I can be of further assistance, please email me privately. Good luck!

Stephan Zimmemann (panaxus)
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written 1347 days ago
cherry

Despite its technical flaws in writing, I'll BACK your book for imagination and the potential it holds. Your over-long sentences, often confusign, leave the reader going back to double-check your exact meaning or descriptions. Since the selection is too short (in typical Authonomy fashion) to allow further comment, c'est tout maintenant.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1347 days ago
cherry

Despite its technical flaws in writing, I'll BACK your book for imagination and the potential it holds. Your over-long sentences, often confusign, leave the reader going back to double-check your exact meaning or descriptions. Since the selection is too short (in typical Authonomy fashion) to allow further comment, c'est tout maintenant.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1347 days ago
cherry

Since factual fiction is my favorite genre, I was pleased to find a believable, authorative addition to the genre.
I am not a nit-picky reader for ... the ability to create supenseful, believable disbelief, draped against foeign settings and familiar alike, and a realistic interaction and motivation between the characters says it all. BACKED!

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1360 days ago
cherry

BACKED ... the subject matter must comes home to every patient who has heard a doctor suggest to take twice the recommended dose of any prescribed medication since he or she simply did not know the answer to a legitimate question or was prevented from do so by the political authorities in charge.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1360 days ago
cherry

Excellent imagination and expression. The title, although, seemed almost off-putting enough to make me dismiss reading your short stories. Glad I did not succumb. Backed.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1377 days ago
cherry

BACKED for an easy whodunit read with an interesting theme.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1381 days ago
cherry

Your chapters may be fine for a personal, home memoir, even though written as fiction, but really quaify for neither fictior or non-fiction. Simple grammatical errors (colons before a quote, etc. ...!) to personal commentary (inflation,smoking,etc.) are inappropriate for fiction. If the story itself does not make the point, give the reader some credit ... or at least make him/her do research on the facts. A few basic classes in writing, characterization, plot, grammar, etc. might pompt a major revison or two, suitable then for backing. In the interim, it seems to be a sweet piece of sentimental "kitchen sink."

Sorry, but authonomy suggests that they want to find fine, new writers ... lots more talented with much moe compelling tales in fiction.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1388 days ago
cherry

Interesting and different venue.Backed.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1389 days ago
cherry

Alisa - BACKED, as I read your tale of moden Islamic women. Would love to read the rest!

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1390 days ago
cherry

BACKED. Curious how your book progresses.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1391 days ago
cherry

Well done, Tony. Entertaining, fast flow and a view of a different slice of life with the miliaria perspective. BACKED, although I'm a strictl pacifict! Hope the remainer of your story keeps its momentum!

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1392 days ago
cherry

More than a delightful break from the mundane! Interesting and imaginative concept, excellent writing and intriguing and motivating to read all that is - alas - available here. I'll not the title and hope to see it on Amazon.
Obviously BACKED!

Stephan Zimmermann (Panaxus)
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written 1403 days ago
cherry

Backed you strictly based on your pitch and the first few pages. Perhaps you'd reciprocate and see whether NO RAPTURE's factual fiction merits your backing, as well?

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1412 days ago
cherry

Backed sinceI I enjoy all well-written items of fiction set about my favorite part of the world! Perhaps you would reciprocate and read NO RAPTURE, set in today's Damascus.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1421 days ago
cherry

Placed Domino Effect on my WL and invite you to review my NO RAPTURE simultaneouly.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1426 days ago
cherry

Any book with fascinating locations and interesting situations receives my backing!

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written 1426 days ago
cherry

Backed.

Please read NO RAPTURE since my work of "factual fiction" deals with real locations, a rare earthquake in Damascus, and the questions of war and natural disaster that have plagued mankind forever down to the present.

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1440 days ago
cherry

Jayne .... BACKED! Unfortunate that you've only exposed three chapters, because it's exactly my type of read. From your eyecatching title to an intiguing story line and realistic characters and locations, it certainly makes me wonder "what's next?"

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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written 1440 days ago
cherry

Jayne .... BACKED! Unfortunate that you've only exposed three chapters, because it's exactly my type of read. From your eyecatching title to an intiguing story line and realistic characters and locations, it certainly makes me wonder "what's next?"

Stephan Zimmermann (panaxus)
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