Hi, read your first 3 chapters. I'm sure that writing it was a cathartic experience that helped exorcise your demons. Well done. Mac view book

Hi, John, or Uncle John if you insist. I'm confused after reading the tag that says romance to describe your novel. I got to chapter 3 and found none. I did find a warning not to read on if you're ugly as sin, which I might be, so I stopped soon after. I have no problem with mysoginistic humour, in ... view book

Dear David. For what it's worth - and it's not much - here are my comments. First, I was unprepared for your opening: it's incredibly raw, and very shocking - in a good way. Your imagery of a battered boy lying in his own filth and praying for death conjures up a powerful atmosphere of hopelessness... view book

Dear Susie, You certainly pack a punch. I've gone thru the first 3 chptrs and backed you - or at least clicked on back this book, so let's hope my vote counts. I can't possibly criticise your work, as it's something incredibly personal and clearly written from the heart. All I can add are my best wi... view book