A good intriguing start and a sharp, concise premise. I would suggest you watch repetition such as the amount of times you say 'Dorothy' or 'Dorothy and Paul' in chapter 1. Happy to back this view book

I couldn't load chapter one but have read the next three chapters. As you mention yourself it is difficult to categorise this into a specific genre and therefore you may have difficulty in finding a market. As has already been said, though, it is an informative piece of work if someone was working i... view book

I like the way you get right to it, no pre-amble but straight into the guts of the story. Great writing and a premise that means I will read more. Love the book cover, by the way. Your characters are believable and their goals not unrealistic. Your descriptions are spot on and I will really enj... view book

Master Act is masterful. You carefully craft the story with beautiful descriptions not only of characters and places but of feelings and emotions too. I shall continue to read but will definitely find room for this on my shelf. If I had any comment, which is not a reflection on the writing but t... view book

Having to give up at the moment as the chapters won't load. However, I have read several chapters and was enthralled. Will read more when the site allows me to! In the meantime no question it has to be backed. view book