This book is certainly interesting. I don't think I've ever really read anything like it. It has a great pace, and there is plenty to interest the reader and keep them hooked. The writing is good as well; the only thing is I'm not sure about all the hyphens, in places I feel that they should be comm... view book

This is a well written and put together story. Not the usual sort of thing that I read, but enjoyable none the less. I think that the mystery of it will keep people reading, along with the fact that the characters are believably written. There doesn't really seem anything negative to point out, so a... view book

I have read all 9 chapters that are uploaded though I only meant to read the first few and come back to it later. Once I got started I was gripped, and I wish there were more to read. The way the story is told draws you in to the narrator's world, and you experience what she is experiencing. The lan... view book

I have read the first chapter, and from it I think that it is a promising beginning. As has been noted below, it is clear that English is not your first language, so the story is quite hard to read. The technical side of writing is always the hardest, regardless of language, but its the easiest part... view book

I definitely think that this is better in first person. The only thing that makes it hard to read is the speech. You start every new sentence within a piece of speech with a another set of speech marks, which made me think that someone different was speaking. It would be easier to follow if the same... view book