Club Agatha Critique 2 I really enjoyed reading the first two chapters finding it interesting and entertaining. I have already fallen in love with the big brute Thatcher and like the twists in chapter two with the new girl Miss Barlowe. Only errors I noticed were in the 1st chapter with your quo... view book

Club Agatha Critique 2 Olga, this one is so chilling and well written. The villain jumps off the page at the reader and scare the bejeebers out of you. You descriptions of the lab scene in the first chapter area right on and he getting the photos was quite spooky. The conflict of the mother and ... view book

Interesting developing story. Three siblings who knew nothing of each other thrown into a mix. The son who thought he was the only one besides his stepmother between him and the money he feels he deserves, and two outcast twins with horrible pasts. Questions, resentments, hurts, mystery and the t... view book

Club Agatha Critique 2 Another winner Raymond. Excellent writing style, fabulous build of intrigue, solid characters and fast moving pace that keeps the audience riveted. This too will do very well. Lena view book

Read the first chapter and I was captivated by the developing story. Characters are rich and well rounded, conversations flow easily, and the descriptiveness is delightful. I think this book will do well. You are a very talented writer. Lena view book