loved the title and the cover. Was worried by the pitch that the book might be a bit preachy but you seemed to avoid sounding preachy in the 2 chapters i read. i enjoyed the chapters and read them to my girls. they wanted a bit more to happen but they are a bit young for your target audience. view book

Great read and a great premise. I have only read chapter one but I may return for more! Two pieces of (hopefully) constructive criticism for you. firstly, I think the angels in the opening revelations quote need to be playing electric guitars, i know it's a quote but you haven't quoted a specific bi... view book

Great title and an interesting and enjoyable read. Your style is very conversational which is a strength. One piece of (hopefully) constructive criticism I would suggest is to consider opening with the paragraph which begins 'One day...' To me this paragraph is the hook and needs to start the book t... view book

Great title and an interesting and enjoyable read. Your style is very conversational which is a strength. One piece of (hopefully) constructive criticism I would suggest is to consider opening with the paragraph which begins 'One day...' To me this paragraph is the hook and needs to start the book t... view book

Great title and an interesting and enjoyable read. Your style is very conversational which is a strength. One piece of (hopefully) constructive criticism I would suggest is to consider opening with the paragraph which begins 'One day...' To me this paragraph is the hook and needs to start the book t... view book